A Demon’s Guide to Getting Hired

I want to be the first to review it, it's so beautiful

It has the flavor of Dragon Clan, but I definitely can't say it's copied from Dragon Clan. It's not inferior to any of Tomatoes' novels. The male protagonist's outlook and personality are to my taste, but I hope he won't be overly enthusiastic (not yet). Finally, I hope the author will work hard and I will catch up to the ending [Punch Out]

Let's add some daily life. The plot is too tight and makes me tired. It would be better if it is more relaxed and relaxed [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I think this book is a good one. After all, the author is a novice, so we can't be too demanding. It looks okay from the beginning, but I can understand some people saying it is naive and awkward, but who is young and has no dreams, and who doesn't want to be a hero. Overall, it has the taste of Jiangnan. I hope it won't be too harsh. (This is one of my few comments. The author looks at me.)

The quality is very high, and the character creation is definitely better than most of Tomato's books. I just don't know why there are so few people. I won't talk about the advantages. Let me talk about the problems I personally found. There are two dual-line narratives in the front. The alternation is a bit too fast, and the senses are a bit unsatisfactory. In addition, some descriptions are a bit abstract, and it is difficult to understand if they are not word for word. Keep up the good work, author!

If you are a Level 5 writer at the starting point, you should be able to serialize online articles like this, in the field of Western fantasy. A qualified online article. Originally I was attracted by its setting. Although it still is. The author has forgotten many pitfalls, such as the series of collection systems represented by Sword in the Rain, which he did not mention much later. Very internet, why? The pace of the story is tight and even fast for the purpose of narration. All objects exist for the plot and embody the story, not the world. The writing style is no longer the immature one it was at the beginning, but it is just the writing style needed for online writing. In Jiang Nan's articles, battles are indeed omitted, but he describes the characters and emotions very delicately, and there are always worthwhile scenes to describe. Of course, his serialization method is different. He serializes it in magazines. The author comes close, but falls short on his merits. I am an old bookworm for more than ten years, mainly in the field of Western fantasy. In this regard, the previously popular "Apocalypse Forecast" succeeded in its sense of grandeur. "Secret" is a system. I don't know what the author's style is. I hope the author can find his own direction in the text, just like the previous book "Apocalypse" is indeed inferior, but the style is there.

The characterization is delicate, the psychological description of the characters is very well controlled, and many characters with different personalities are truly created. I think the setting is very similar to the world view of Chainsaw Man. Secondly, the main theme is the inescapable fate of each character. I don't know how it will be dealt with in the future. However, personally, what attracts me the most is the relationship between Qin Shangyuan and Su Bai. Qin always feels that Su Bai is so good to him, but there is no evidence that the other party likes him. The relationship between the two has always been quite tacit and ambiguous. When I read that Su Bai threw away the photo album by the lake, my heart felt like it was pinched by a big hand. After more than ten years of companionship, they were separated by someone's understatement. That This kind of pain and powerlessness makes me suffocated, but according to Xia Shou's respect for young people's wishes, I still look forward to the follow-up development. The author relies on the scene of uttering truth after drinking to express the feelings of Su Bai, Qin Shangyuan and Xia Qianrou very well. Generally speaking, I like the author's emotional line very much. Whether Jiang Yang and Lin Lan or Xia Pu and Vera, beautiful love always makes people yearn for it. No one wants to leave regrets in life.

The book is very exciting, but this is Tomato, so we still have to write more about daily life. There are too many plot and battle settings that are very tiring to read. On the contrary, every time I see the daily interaction between the male and female protagonists, I feel very relaxed and comfortable, and it is easy to get addicted to it. And do the male and female protagonists have to go through a lot of hardships before they can be together? Appropriate obstacles can enhance the relationship between the male and female protagonists and attract people, but too much sadness and slowness will seem very deliberate, and readers will not like to read it. Secondly, I believe that many people who come to Tomato to read books want to read some novels that are lighthearted, interesting and not so cliché, rather than the fact that the male protagonist is so frustrated that he can hardly do a few things. When we watched "Dragon", we were still young and passionate, but now so many ups and downs are making people tired. Finally, can we not let there be so many obstacles between the male and female protagonists, just be appropriate.

It's a very good book, with a lot of references. It contains a lot of my past youth, including many mysterious and sequence elements, etc... It has a plot very similar to Dragon Clan, and very similar characters. I have to say that the plot of this book has a different feel. Although I don't want to follow the old path of Dragon Clan, because that book It contains a lot of regrets. This one does not need to be the same. It should have its own world and emotions. Its protagonist does not need to be as cowardly and incompetent as the Dragon Clan. I hope Qin Shangyuan can really choose the girl who is really good to him. I hope that the battlefield of "Devil" is about reunion, victory and redemption; rather than regret, failure and loneliness. Although a boy becomes a king, this road should probably be accompanied by friends. A good drama program relies on all the actors, not on the growth of one person. The other participants are on the road of continuous falling. That is not a good story. To put it bluntly, the battlefield is difficult, but when it is reached to the extreme, it is really... Well... Good stories do not exist to write about swords.

To be honest, it is a very good book, with good foreshadowing and a very promising world view. The author's writing style is interesting, and you can see many advantages of other books in this book. There is also something in the narrative style. I feel that the author is very, very good at writing double lines. Believe me, this book has a future. However, so far, the existence of the protagonist seems to have been deliberately downplayed, and it feels like he has only used the spine (the sword) once after obtaining it. This is the biggest poisonous point.