Simulating Ancient Civilizations: My Nine-Tailed Fox Sister Regrets It for the Rest of Her Life

The writing is quite good, but the length is too long. If I write the following stories at this pace, four or five stories may require 5.6 Hundred chapters. The outline may be able to handle it, but each story chapter is so long that readers may not be able to handle it. The update speed will slow down the rhythm and cause readers to lose. If you keep the current quality, you can keep reading it. One chapter a day may be less than 1/4 of a story in a month. Some people will abandon it if they no longer want to keep it. My personal opinion is that around 50 chapters is actually enough. If I want to write it more carefully, 70 chapters would be enough. For example, the protagonist is still "consuming" after it has been delayed until Chapter 92. Not to mention that it may be because of the regret of revealing the truth to arouse emotions. Before that, the readers' emotions will be exhausted first, and when everything is revealed, they will only feel "good energy consumption". I have lost the "expectation" evoked by the previous chapters. And now I feel that the rhythm is dragging on. The most powerful knife for revealing the truth in the "Sacrifice" genre is "the light will be extinguished after death, and there is no way to make up for it. There is no way to make up for it." It is not about seeing each other for the last time, revealing all regrets, and regretting it too late. Although it also guides emotions, it is not as strong as the previous one. Personally, I feel that firstly, the length can be refined and optimized, and it starts to drag a bit starting from chapter 90. Secondly, the daily progress and update speed drag down the rhythm of the story, which has already made some emotions disconnected. Finally, I would like to say that the author's writing style is quite good. It is considered to be very good among the many books I have read. The descriptions are also very delicate, but the processing of certain things is a bit slow, but it can also be said that it is because the novel's story line needs to be displayed to advance. Personal suggestions only represent individuals and are for reference only. Come on.

Overall, it's very good. The length of your simulation is more conducive to telling the world view setting of each simulation's storyline and the impact of supporting characters on the growth of the protagonist. It is also more conducive to portraying the personalities of the heroine and the protagonist. But to be honest, most people read this kind of simulation at a fast pace, looking at the Shura field with many female protagonists and the harem life of the male protagonist. Although I personally like this kind of delicate portrayal, for the sake of the author's future, I suggest that the author try to keep the length of the simulation as short as possible [face covering]

The author writes very well, but some people say the pace is too slow. But in this way, the plot and emotions can be displayed in a more delicate and thought-provoking way. This is also the author's preference and the characteristic of this book. If it has to be as fast-paced as other simulations, it will be ordinary and boring. There are so many fast-paced games, why bother chasing one more? On the contrary, it is the unique feature of this book that is really hard to find.

The writing and character creation are good, but some of the plots that should be mentioned in one sentence are a bit lengthy. If you can save on the plots that do not serve the main line, this book will be quite good if you hone it again [Like]

Overall, it is a very good novel among simulation-themed novels. The first story is the best. It is about the end of the world between man and beast, but also to guard against other tribes. The male protagonist goes out of his way to save his sister. When he came, he saw his son under the peach tree, and when he returned, he was also under the peach tree. He used the peach blossom petals buried under the peach tree as a guide to give his son the soul of survival. The second story is a little longer, but the Thirteenth Princess's infatuation is indeed desperate. Even though it was concealed too much before, she still loves the hero without forgetting her original intention. Finally, she is happy and moved to know the whole story, and her efforts are worthy of it. The third story is also interesting, but the author is in a hurry to finish it, otherwise it shouldn't be too bad. The eldest lady who comes to break off the engagement is finally limited by her own limitations. In order to escape the fate of ordinary people, she is willing to become the servant of the male protagonist. Even after she dies, she is only willing to continue to take care of the male protagonist as a puppet. After many years of accompanying him day and night, she finally moved the male protagonist, created a core for him, and helped him achieve supreme status. The author's writing style is great, and the plot is delicately drawn. It is on par with My Sacrificial Life. I look forward to the next masterpiece. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The plot and characterization are both good. The main problem is that the plot is too long for an infinite stream. In fact, it can be offline immediately after running away or after the death of the Elephant King. Anyway, the introduction says that we will come back to it in the end. The content is not important and we can just come back and summarize it later.

It feels good, the slow-paced immersion is good, the emotional portrayal is also unique, and the characters are very well drawn. As long as you control your own rhythm [love]...

The first world is so classic, most people should have seen similar ones. Replacing humans and animals with immortals and demons is another traditional fairy tale [face covering], which results in no exciting points at the beginning, and the author's writing is a bit long, which delays the exciting points. Therefore, I suggest that the author should either make it shorter to make it more enjoyable, or add some funny and other elements.

It's not that the pace is slow, but that every time it is the author's sincere thinking, sincere feelings, and serious attitude that does not want to be perfunctory and speed up the pace. The author should not be discouraged and stressed, just do what you think is right. [Like] [Blow kiss]

The name is a bit crude, but the content is very interesting. Although the overall plot of this novel, many novels with this type of theme follow a similar trend and feel a bit like a template, but there are also many innovative places. This book is very detailed, especially in terms of emotions. The author is very attentive. Don't listen too much to other people's ideas, just follow your own ideas. It would be better if it is updated faster. Don't care about many people's criticisms. Come on, author.