After Breaking Off the Engagement, I Raised the Tortured Novel's Heroine into a Sword Immortal

The writing style is very delicate. It is either a sentence unique to Tomato or a paragraph of short white text. It gave me a feeling of being a literary youth (not derogatory) like a beacon fire drama about princes. It is very interesting, but it is a bit regretful that I did not see the slap-in-the-face clip of the Supreme Elder Qin worshiping the protagonist as his disciple at the disciple recruitment meeting. Why not eat the soft rice of the apprentice? I said it too early 🤦. In Chapter 46, I thought that the sect leader would come in person to apologize and ask questions about the practice. After all, this is related to the future of the practice of everyone in the sect. It has been agreed that whoever can solve this problem will be handed over to the sect, but in the end, I agreed because of a piece of information 😄. The whole book just keeps bowing to various female protagonists and licking them. I have already guessed that the master and the senior sister will come in the future, and they must have forgiven each other in a few words, and then licked it 🤦 The bag will not be cleared 😄, pretending to know everything, but in fact, in the eyes of these female protagonists, it is just a licking look, which means the writing is better, so I still keep the three stars. I can't stand it anymore, brothers, please take care of yourself, this is a licking novel.

In the rescue novel, the male protagonist adds points to himself by rescuing the abusive female protagonist. Currently, he has rescued a female sword fairy from seven hundred years ago. (The male protagonist is also full of buffs) The master who rebelled against the sect left the male protagonist to be punished The senior sister who dug out her own golden elixir caused her own cultivation to be ruined And the goddess sect who broke off the engagement😤 is indeed the script of Destiny's Child

The writing is pretty good, but the plot has some toxic points. These are not explained clearly at the end, so it makes people uncomfortable to watch. It's too early to say that Dabi's writing in that paragraph is really bad. A group of riddle people, often interspersed with some inexplicable plots. It's very uncomfortable for others to read, and it doesn't feel like it was written by one person.

I didn't regret reading this book at all. After reading it, I feel that I will be drawn into it by the author's delicate writing style. The whole article is smart, fresh and full of new ideas, and it transforms many elements that are difficult to write at the moment into clear layers. After watching it, I really felt my mood improved. Of course, this is not a cool article. If you read too much Shuangwen, you will get bored and irritable. This book progresses gently and silently, describing the characters delicately and sublimating them. Ahhhh~ I feel so good

This book has a very delicate description of emotions, which is its biggest advantage, but there are also some controversies. For example, regarding the treatment of the protagonist's senior sister and master, many people think that the male protagonist is a turtle, but I think the male protagonist is more like the Asashi male protagonist in ancient Japanese comics. The female protagonists fight with each other, while the male protagonist calms down and leads the harem leisurely. However, if the punishment for the senior sister and master is just a spanking, it is indeed a bit too light ( ⩌⤚⩌), also, I want to see Jiang Yiqing regretting it and being severely humiliated by the male protagonist~ʕ ◦`꒳´◦ʔBecause Jiang Yiqing's submissive look is indeed very cute~=ᗜωᗜ=

Generally speaking, the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws. Simulation plots are not uncommon in Tomatoes. Most of them are nothing special. However, the author's only outstanding advantage is that the writing style is good and the atmosphere is well created. Sometimes there is a slight sadness when writing simulations. If you like this kind of atmosphere, it will be a good read, but the shortcomings are also obvious. The author uses this dual-line method to write the novel, which sometimes feels a bit messy and the reading experience is not very coherent. Moreover, the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, including Chapter 144 that I am currently reading. Because some of the foreshadowing in the early stage will not be until the later stage. It can only be recycled, so you will be a little confused when reading it, so I also hope that the author will slow down the pace of the story a bit. It will be much better to tell one story in one space, but overall it is still good. Readers who are short of books and like rich and delicate emotions should still be able to read it. Keep up the good work, author

I just read Chapter 152. I don't understand the portrayal of the male protagonist as to what kind of person he wants to be. It's too ruthless, and it's as ugly as facial paralysis. A single pixel of the corner of the mouth raised can make girls blush and their hearts beat. In fact, the description of Jiang Yiqing in the front made me feel a little stomach ache. When I saw Fu Yanqing's in the back, it was even worse. Why does the definition of vicious female supporting role have to be the two Su sisters? Besides these two, won't anyone else turn black? My motivation for pursuing this book actually lies in the writing. Although there are a lot of repetitions, I think it's just a personal writing habit. Later, I felt that Lin Shiwan was completely eroded by God's will (female channel). It may be my personal poison. I know that the male protagonist likes simulated battles, but I just feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is too cold. This way of writing allows readers to see that girls who like him also follow him. I feel uncomfortable, it would be better to have a single male without a female protagonist, get the simulator and recover his cultivation level, and go to seek revenge from the master sister. Maybe the viewing experience is much better than the current ramble (it is definitely not the ramble I like to read). I will definitely read this book to the end, but I want to express my own thoughts. I respect the author's writing and other people's opinions. I just don't understand it, that's all. Finally, I now hope that someone can tell me in the most straightforward, direct, non-detoured, objective, correct, systematic, truthful, concise, easy to understand, and least pretentious way: Jian Jia, Nuan Yu, Yi Qing, Qing Yuan, Leng Qing Qiu, Yan Zhao Xue, Will Yan Qing be collected or not?

I have finished reading the first simulation. I feel that the writing is very good, but I am a little anxious. In the first simulation, everything the male protagonist gives to the female protagonist is basically based on the premise of harming himself, and it feels like torture for the sake of torture. Moreover, the setting does not feel like someone who writes about cultivating immortals. You can feed your destiny to others at the golden elixir stage; Kenshin can steal the use of others; people who can create their own exercises to make up for congenital physical defects without any negative effects will be treated as waste if their cultivation is gone; the exercises have been practiced for several years, and they cannot continue to practice after returning the book.

😳 The description is delicate. Although sometimes I like to repeat the plot and the plot, it does not prevent it from being a good-looking article. As a newcomer, it is far beyond my expectations. It is awesome. There are too many women. I am very worried about the male protagonist. I will bear it for him if he applies for a replacement.

I haven't seen such comfortable writing in a long time. The heroines in the author's works are very vivid, as if they are acting in front of you. The author also has his own considerations in the process of writing, such as what the normal plot development is like, and the author will avoid the shortcomings of those old routines, and correct and erase the shortcomings silently. It is very comfortable to read. The male protagonist's character is also very well created. He has an online IQ. He will keep an eye on himself when dealing with things. He will also pay attention to what is happening around him and will not act rashly until the evidence is confirmed. What impressed me the most was the author's concept of educating people. His three views are surprisingly correct. He will give his own opinions on the choices of the children around him, but if the children still insist on his own approach, he will not impose his own ideas on them. He will only try to minimize the risks of the matter. After all, it is not always possible to teach others, but just teach them once. If I were to rate this book, it would be rated at 9.6. I wouldn't rate it at 0.4 Because I haven't finished reading it yet and I don't dare to draw any conclusions. If the author insists on writing like this, I believe the rating will be more than six points.