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As a fast-travel novel, the plot of this book is very much in line with my taste. I would like to make some suggestions here. It's the various descriptions that go on for a long time. Better to refine it. I love the other ones very much, and I hope you can take my suggestions. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The plot is pretty good and the writing is also good. The shortcoming is that it always writes long paragraphs of descriptions of characters and environments, which are very similar to AI, and it is not very attractive when written. I hope the author can streamline it [Blowing Kiss] It is not easy to find two female protagonists who are very suitable for me.

I read the latest chapter in one breath. If I have any feelings about this book, it is that the author is growing up with the heroines in her works. Many times, we find that we need an opportunity to find ourselves, and the appearance of Shu Shu is to give these heroines an opportunity to find themselves. But before that, we have to make sure whether we have given up. From Ye Beginning with Li Xuan, then Gu Lianying, Shen Zhaoyu, and now Lin Shuyue, I have seen four different lives. Just like I like Ye Lixuan's brilliance and restraint, and her work "Eternal Love" after confirming her love, the eternity of being supportive and evenly matched for each other; I like Gu Lianying's unyielding in adversity, and her own self-confidence that Xiaohui talked about. , Just like she has never lost herself; she likes Shen Zhaoyu's staunchness, and her focus and persistence on love, and it is very gratifying to watch a flower grow; she likes Lin Shuyue's dedicated and pure love, maybe she is not perfect, but she has been working hard; and Shu Shu's forbearing and lasting love gives every heroine full tolerance and freedom. Now many people like the big heroine novel , I am the same, watching women become self-reliant and not becoming vases, I have my own thoughts, but there are not so many things that go well in life, you always have to live on the line, so I like sweet stories, and this book is a sweet story, although many male characters in it make me hate it, but you always have to face it in life, right? So, the most important thing is to work hard to strengthen yourself. Just like the author described a thing too complicatedly at the beginning, resulting in a lot of unexplored places. Now he has control over his work. Isn't this a kind of heroine? Maybe the story will be more exciting in the future, but life is short, why not give it a try? I hope this book sells well and I hope it can be released smoothly. I will review it when the time comes.

It's nice to watch. I like the ones with different heroines in each world [Blow kiss] Those 1v1 scenes with the same person in each world are too cliche and too idealistic. Talking about all types of beauties is the right answer [OK]

The plot is ok, I personally think the environment scenes and character descriptions are a bit long (don't 🙅🏻‍♀️ scold me)

Author, please reflect on yourself, why do you have the nerve to update every day? Beautiful! Big cheers for the author

All I can say is don't suppress cheats, the description of the environment and characters is less, and the emotional aspect is still a bit fast. You can get rid of the male protagonist as soon as possible (I really don't like a guy jumping up and down like crazy, so use some strategy and don't let the male protagonist stick to his face). Use this part to develop the emotional line, give it five stars to encourage it

It's really beautifully written! The author worked very hard too!

There is still a little bit of environment description and clothing description in the first few pictures, which adds to the taste, but it is still okay in the later stages. There is a lot less environment description and clothing description. The author will continue to work hard [currently working on the manuscript]

The writing is pretty good, and every world is quite sweet. It would be nice if there weren't so many scene descriptions, but then there won't be so many scene descriptions.