The Scumbag Rescue Handbook

I didn't expect that I could write so much, come on! Keep writing until it is finished.

It's good to read [adoration][adoration][adoration] The early paragraphs are quite long, so it's a bit messy. But as you continue reading, you will find that the author's writing skills have improved, the writing is also very beautiful, and the storyline is logical and interesting! [Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's a little confusing at the beginning, but it gets better at the end, and the layout has also improved a lot. There are just some logic problems in some places, and lack of details... Overall, it's okay, and there are some funny ones. It can be seen that the author has grown up a lot. This book is still okay. It can also be seen that the author is slow to develop feelings, but there are traces to follow. I can accept the speed and success. The ending and achievement are achieved.

Looks good! Looking forward to the follow-up

Hmm... I like the subject matter, and I can see it gradually improving during the writing process. However, the narrative expression of the storyline is a bit poor, and there is a sense of escape. The above does not follow the following, and I cannot immerse myself in it. Also, the description of the characters gives people a "secondary" human-machine feeling, like the NPC in the game guiding the plot. In short, keep up the good work and look forward to seeing a better next one (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Use quotation marks for what you say, otherwise it will be difficult to distinguish.

One of the few articles I've read on Tomato, they're good

It's very beautiful. Before I watched it, I suspected that Jiang Shisan was a woman, but when I saw that the word "he" was a boy, I thought I had guessed wrong, but it turned out to be true.

Looks good, um, no more, just to make up the numbers

It's beautiful, cheers to the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]