The Villainess I Picked Up Keeps Trying to Claim the Nobody for Herself

Generally speaking, the author's writing is very good, but there are still some minor flaws. However, it can be seen from the back that the author is slowly improving, but I still have a few small problems. 1. In fact, when I watched the first small world, I personally felt a little angry and had a sense of powerlessness (personal opinion). Lin Qingwu did not seem to be cleansed and turned against the wind as shown in the introduction. After Shen Miao's death, she seemed to have been living in Shen Miao's shadow. Maybe I understood it wrong, but until Chapter 39, Lin Qingwu was still a little afraid of Shen Miao, and it seemed that she had not achieved a comeback against the wind. 2. The emotional line may be a bit rushed. Although it is a two-way redemption, from the first small world until now, I personally always feel that Xia Yan has always been giving. There is a bit of stiffness in the middle. At the end, the first world ends with a confession. I don't know what the attitude is. I will wait for other small worlds to see how it goes. 3. As for the first small world that has been completed so far, Lin's mentality seems to have not changed much. There is even a sense of resignation in the back, which makes people feel a little aggrieved. In fact, I always feel that the first small world is not a real redemption. Lin still does not surpass Shen in the end, and people still admire Shen. I don't see much of the whitewash. I hope that the subsequent small worlds will be better. 4. The introduction talks about two-way redemption, but it seems that I only saw Xia's efforts. In the first world, Lin kept trapping himself in place. After taking a step, he felt a little self-defeating when he was hit (personal opinion). Later, when Xia completed the company's cooperation and introduced Shen's products, Lin thought that Xia had betrayed him. This mentality lasted for a long time. Later, Xia Lai took the initiative to reconcile. 5. Although the system says it will listen to Xia's words, sometimes its behavior doesn't quite reflect it. Could it be Xia's poison? In short, sometimes the system doesn't listen to the heroine Xia's words, but otherwise it's fine. 6. Finally, there is Xia Yan. Sometimes she is too peaceful. Although she is following the path of sentient beings, in the first world, the two men provoked Xia so much, but she simply let them go without paying any price? The clay figurine still has a temper. Generally speaking, the author's writing is quite good. I am currently following the second small world. I hope the author will continue to write more and stop getting the character names wrong [Chigua]

It's very beautiful, but the ending is always mentioned in one go. It's obviously the most exciting part [rolls eyes]

It's still okay to watch it now, and it's the type I like to watch. But why does each small world end so hastily? [What] In the first world, the confession was made, and then it was gone. The two worlds started directly without any transition. It was too jumpy. The second world was also the same, as if the ending was deleted. I have not been with the protagonist so far. If you like to read stories after love, you can skip the first two worlds. I haven't finished reading the third world yet. I don't know if there will be a love line.

I like the gradual relationship line, but why in the first world is the confession and then suddenly it's gone 😢

A very good redemption story. The ending of the first small world is a bit hasty. Ask if each small world is the same person?

It's pretty good, but the ending of the first world is just a little bit unfinished [what]

The gentle character gives people a feeling of being separated but still in spirit. Light

It looks good, but it's too short. By the way, let me ask you, when will I enter the QQ space?

So far, the characters of the two protagonists are very suitable to my liking, and I hope they can continue to work hard.

Very interesting, every story is interesting