Ji Gong: Heaven Has Three Rebels, and What a Coincidence, So Am I

The writing is good, and it perfects the relationship between Daoji and Yanzhi. Although the other parts are a bit nonsensical, but when I think about it, it is the world view of the living Buddha Jigong in the film and television, not the traditional Journey to the West, or The Great Desolate, so it is normal to be a bit nonsensical, and it is very interesting. Come on, author, please make it 2 million words at most. No one has written this kind of book. As someone who grew up reading Chen Haomin's version of Jigong, I really like the plot of this work. It's a bit convoluted in some places, but it doesn't affect the overall viewing.

Come on, the author works hard.

Author When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you wait for the second update, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is taken more seriously. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, the bookworm memories have a place for you, even if In a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark Traces. Updating your heart may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them All come from insufficient updates.

It looks good. Arhat Subduing the Dragon is also known as Venerable Kayapa, but Arhat Subduing the Dragon also has a background. He is the master of Arhat Subduing the Dragon, Sakyamuni Buddha. For example, if you come to the Buddha, remember to add it! Great author! ! ! !

How did Wang Yuyan and Li Shishi contain it without even showing any traces [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Some people always say that it is unreasonable for an Arhat to be beaten by a mortal, and that it is normal for Living Buddha Jigong to be a comedy. In the later Baolian Lantern TV series, Agarwood crosses out the names of the villagers in the life and death book, and then the ordinary villagers will not die (only have the ability to die) and can fight the heavenly soldiers.

Don't hold back, what is written in Chapter 119 is still under review [face covering]

It doesn't make sense for you not to enter the small dark room. Send a child to Guanyin, tsk tsk tsk, there are so many Journey to the West novels that I dare not write. Brother, you have to remember that an author who doesn't enter a dark room is not a good author. You are very good and I am very optimistic about you. Hehehe [Sparrow Food Masterwork]

Good, good, very good [laughing]

Generally speaking, the plot can be relatively smooth, and it is much better written than others. I just want to say that some areas still need improvement.