In the Snow: The Great Immortal of Beiliang Takes Xu Weixiong as His Disciple

When Daying returns, he discovers that his daughter has been sold to a brothel by his enemies. The power of a king cannot be bullied. He recruits a hundred thousand soldiers with a wave of his hand to achieve success for his daughter [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

I'm so annoyed by your boastful articles, how exaggerating are you? After blowing the protagonist to the point of being invincible, what else is there to say about the Three Thousand Avenues? ? ? The next look at the record is 0-5! What does it mean to write a novel like this? Aren't you asking for trouble?

After reading ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. You said you cultivated immortality, but I didn't see it, nor did you have the identity of an immortal.

I wanted to write a protagonist with the same personality and abilities as Daying Immortal, but I only wrote a pretender with Daying Immortal's abilities, which was an insult to Zuo Ruotong. It's better to just point it out. For the protagonist who has acquired Daying Immortal's ability, don't try to forcefully write how Daying Immortal looks like in the snow.

Now that you have the heart to cultivate your life? There's also a fucking master-disciple relationship, it's hard to get past this level of love. Now that you have the heart to cultivate your life?

I tried my best to finish reading it without vomiting. There are too many poisonous points. In fact, I just want to ask, is it so difficult to accept a disciple? What's your feedback? You don't have any immortal cards, and you're still in the martial arts world, so you can't go to other places to hang out. You have to play in Beiliang Tingchao Pavilion. There are more beauties in other places with more personality, and they still can't satisfy you? What's the point of dividing the realm in the snow? Lao Tzu's martial arts golden elixir, Shattering the Void, has no cards? Martial God and Martial Saint have no status?

Liuku and Nisheng are in conflict

The system gives a bunch of messy things. The force level has not just started. The reverse triple is high. The more you write, the lower the force level is.

Various water word counts and content are repeatedly narrated He just pointed out the blue bird and fell in love secretly without saying a few words. I really wish that a female mosquito would secretly fall in love with the protagonist when she sees it.

I think the apprentices are relatively good, and there are some surprises, and they are not clichéd. However, in terms of the martial arts feedback, I think we can still consider it a little more. I think there are some martial arts that I can master enough to become a land god. At least I don't feel embarrassed when I read it now. It's very natural.