Wuxia Crossover: Starting by Laying Siege to Xu Fengnian

Do you want to see your profile? As far as I can see, the chapters you wrote have nothing to do with the introduction.

It's very confusing, I don't know what to write? The protagonist has no composure at all and is always impatient in every situation. How can he be a general?

I thought I could handle it, but I didn't expect it. I was careless and didn't dodge.

After reading a few chapters, what do you think? The protagonist is not very resourceful. There are many layouts in this building and that building, but the result is that there are leaks and rain everywhere. Whether it is Qing Yu Nian or in the snow, it is not a martial arts drama. In fact, it is a conspiracy drama. When the author writes this fanfic, he has to show some intelligence, especially the protagonist, so don't overwhelm him.

It's not that cool. I can't stand the appeal.

It's very confusing, I can sort out my thoughts later.

It's quite explosive in the entire novel world.

It was a mess. I wrote one thing here and another and it was not coherent at all. Then I went to Emperor Wu City to force the plot to be continued. I sent more than ten pictures and wrote how messy it was. The general manager is a traitor. In the end, nothing happened. I went directly to Emperor Wu City. Is there no need to clean up the traitor? The situation does not need to be stabilized. This traitor is a general manager. , And the protagonist is very frustrated now. How come a young man becomes famous and a high-spirited young man, but he feels depressed throughout the whole process without writing anything?

All I can say is that it has nothing to do with the introduction, and it's still very frustrating.

I hope the author can grasp the rhythm well, it doesn't seem to be very easy to write [top post]