Forced to Take In Her Orphaned Child, She Seems Different

The book is quite comfortable to read, but the pace of the daily salvation story is slow. I feel that the previous content is a bit boring. If you calm down and read it, it will be fine. But if you are a little impatient (want to see the yandere quickly), you can't read it. It feels like eating a chicken rack. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. I wanted to jump to watch but the content behind was unavailable. Either male or female protagonist will work. Summary: It's a good article, but if you can't calm down and read it, it will feel like chewing on the words. But the advantages outweigh the disadvantages (which are few). Worth a look👍👍👍 The female protagonist is a bit too deified, almost like a robot, and Cheng Che feels like the male protagonist as soon as he appears. If it had always been written in this way, it would have been directly changed to Lu Wei and Lin Shen, Cheng Che and Su Wan. I hope to see the heroine take the initiative to break her fixed thinking in the later stage 🥺

The writing style is an author who has his own characteristics among the many books I have read. Different from most daily writings, although this book focuses on daily descriptions, it does not bury emotions directly in the words like ordinary novels. Instead, it has a scientific thinking that requires you to slowly infer the emotional narrative by yourself, and prove the relationship between the protagonists step by step. It has its own characteristics. However, I would like to make some suggestions. The description of time in the article is very brief, which makes it easy to feel abrupt or confusing if you do not read it carefully. For example, the narrative related to Cheng Che is very abrupt when it first appears, without any warning, and then directly goes through the flashbacks before and after the competition to describe the process of getting acquainted. However, there is a lack of direct description of time. If you do not read it carefully, it may make readers feel very confused. However, readers of this kind of novel rarely read it carefully word for word.

A common problem with popular yandere novels is that the yandere in the novel is generally just an attribute of the heroine, and is often used to portray the part of a person who lacks love. However, in popular descriptions, this kind of character is just to support a character to meet the needs of commercialization, and the transformation process is often missing. Or it is too abrupt and sick for the sake of illness, which leads to errors in the character's logic, and the overall plot perception is not good. I have read a lot of yandere articles with the theme of development, but there are also many that are easy to break down in the middle, especially the relationship between the supporting characters and the plot, and the conflict between the character logic and the plot; for example, in the description of the transformation process, sometimes many poisonous points are easily hidden here. You can see from the comments that most readers are currently uncomfortable with the supporting character Cheng (for the reason I mentioned in the comments in the article), so consider writing this type of subject matter For business, you need to avoid several obvious poisonous points. Of course, as long as there are novels, there must be clowns. This method often appears in the public in the form of a Shura field in the interaction between the male protagonist and other people. (Readers have double standards. They can accept the existence of a harem, but they will have a greater mental obsession with the women in the article. This is more obvious in yandere novels. This is a two-way choice between the reader and the author). Process is necessary, and writing your own path is also necessary. Of course, don't go too circuitous. The system may be complicated, but it only takes a pure heart to write stories. Ps: Of course life is not what you want, but I still like to watch something sweet. By: min

The in-depth understanding of emotions and the daily conversations between the male and female protagonists can always make people immerse themselves in it. When I read the front page, I consciously understood that the author's yandere novels do not have the same plot as most yandere novels on the market, but this is also the main reason for people to continue reading. ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧

The narrative rhythm is relatively brisk, and it is not as irritable as other Tomato novels. However, there are some deficiencies in language description, which ordinary readers may not be able to see. However, the way the male protagonist speaks is consistent with the way the genius girl speaks, or it should be said that the two people look like the same person. The different personalities of different characters are not well distinguished. This is not in line with the similar but different life experiences of the two. Of course, it is difficult to have a good independent character personality. I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve his language and writing!

This book is awesome! Don't be fooled by the rating, the writing is better than some 9.5 Novels, and the narrative is eloquent, immersive and relaxing. Stop torturing readers. The content can be repeated but don't keep repeating it. I can't watch the process of the heroine writing the program, reading the program, and shutting down the computer more than ten times.

This is definitely not a formulaic yandere writing template. If you can bear to read it, it will make your eyes bright. The plain words can convey a stable power and a quiet feeling of moisturizing things. The characters are special, and the emotional development is also special, but it is also delicate enough. I believe in the potential of this book. Come on author 👍

The writing is good, and the arrangement of the characters in the plot is also perfect. The heroine Su Wan has a normal friend (female) and an academic friend (male) in the field of mathematics. The author has done a good job in handling this aspect. The heroine has no real contact with Jacky, and Jacky's feelings and boundaries for her are immediately eliminated and strictly controlled. There are no poisonous points in other novels (no physical contact, no daily interactions...). Even though it still makes me feel uncomfortable, I can understand the role of writing about Jacky. First, I can gain new understanding and insights on the heroine's mathematical journey. Second, through Jacky's feelings for her, she can clarify her feelings for the protagonist, thus opening up the emotional line. The current pace is very slow. The heroine was 12 years old at the beginning and is now 13 years old. About 50 chapters have been written for a year's plot. According to this trend, the relationship between the male and female protagonists will officially open in chapter 300. But 300 chapters are too many, and I'm afraid the author will be a eunuch if he doesn't write them all. It is recommended to open the love line in Chapter 120

Originally I wanted to give it zero points, but after thinking about it carefully, I decided not to. After all, the sentences in this article are quite vivid and the plot is okay, but there are a lot of repetitions and the competition for favor (I don't know why, the heroine cried inexplicably and the protagonist asked if it was because he was on the phone with someone else?) It is suspected of AI. Even if it's AI, I'll admit it, because this article is really good and the special details of the characterization can only be said to be gold-rimmed. If the author sees my comment, please give me an answer. Is it AI? If so, can you modify it next time you publish it? The book is dead, but the love of the characters is real.

This novel is very well written and the author's technique is skillful, but I don't like this type of novel (the author writes very well, it's really good, but I don't like the previous ones), but the author writes really well. I give the author five stars because I can't judge the author's writing because of my own liking. Come on, author.