Limbus Company: The Broken Wing's Feather

Judging from the external score, the writing is passable, organized and logical, not nerve-wracking, and there is no blind ambush (I don't know if it's because the knife is more ruthless or because the supporting roles are clear and impressive). Progress will be made within a certain period of time, followed by the next bigger mystery, and the increasingly anticipated story development is also the motivation to continue reading (coming from someone who has finished the plot of the ruined library and Yun Naoye and the Bus) (feeling), there is no feeling of spoiling the world view, the writing focus is clear, and there are not many redundant pens (I don't know if the 6 Association small gang incident at the beginning was glossed over, if not it should be foreshadowing, if not, it also has a feeling of urban daily life.) The feeling of multi-faceted foreshadowing is the normal state of the city. The city is full of mysteries, and all kinds of small or big events are brewing in the dark. It is very exciting, isn't it? As for the enjoyment of the article, I feel that if you don't know YJ well, you will have less of a feeling: How can this person survive so well? Is this right? You have to have someone by your side, right? Isn't that what it feels like when you feel refreshed? I also read the book about falling in love with Angela, mainly to understand regret and pain 😭 (the love part is also a highlight! Whisper bb) Compared to that book, this one has a heavier sense of mystery and ghosts, the feeling of rising combat power is gentle and full of mystery, and the fighting part is very good. That's all I thought of for the moment, and I followed up on the part where the three of them returned to the collapsed branch to recover the abnormality. Look! In addition: The boundary between the Lobe Company game and the novel is very well adjusted. It is not like a complete game. Some of my own ideas have been added. Although it is a branch, the lightning protection headquarters is taken from the EGO of A, weakening the gamification details. This is a feeling that many YJ novels do not have, but the performance of the protagonist as an ordinary person makes him not prominent in the plot. I hope the author will consider this. In the subsequent library chapters, I personally hope not to suddenly add a large number of mod character packs. This is based on my experience in another YJ article. The large number of supporting characters, most of them without pictures, and the need for them to promote the plot make the plot extremely messy and complicated, making it difficult to remember and understand. In addition, I wonder what kind of sparks other associations besides the 6 Associations will have with the protagonist? (Ryu Jin, handsome!) And five fingers. In the library part, I don't know whether to focus on the library or the city? Or is it the protagonist? Of course, it's a bit early to say this, just treat it as fans' suggestions, and I hope it's based on your own ideas. The bus part is very confusing, so I won't talk about it, but are you going to talk about the red-haired employee? I hope there is a role for her (please🙏)

It is a surprising monthly novel that closely matches the style of the original work. This is an oversight in many other fan novels. This novel contains the helpless and commonplace urban daily life, the description of abnormal images that shock understanding, and the assembly-line iteration of the names of passers-by ( At least for now, you can rest assured of the author's imagination. In short, this is an amazing fan fiction, please bear witness! (Elden's ringside speech) This novel is excellent as a fan novel for games under Project Moon 1. The author's writing ability and selection of materials successfully depict the so-called "urban style". Sudden death, indifferent yet entangled human nature, and the storyline are sometimes hopeful and sometimes make readers think about the question "what is the real hope in the city?" 2. The author is currently writing a story in the Lobotomy Company period, and he has a good grasp of the plot. From the perspective of an employee who has just joined the Lobe branch, it depicts chaotic urban daily life and extremely impactful scenes of abnormal management and suppression; for the original Lobo novel, which lacks the perspective of grassroots employees, this novel is a perfect complement to the perspective. 3. The plot not only depicts the depressive atmosphere of the city, but also describes interpersonal relationships and social processes to an appropriate degree, allowing readers to understand why they feel depressed without having to contact the original work to gain rationality. As a reader, I very much hope that these insights can help those children who think that Yueji is not good enough to write fan fiction but want to read something to strengthen their determination to give this novel a try. And I tried to make some suggestions to the author, I hope it will be helpful. 1. The awakening of divine equipment and distortion seem to be very simple settings, but in fact it is very difficult to write in fan fiction, because the novel is not like the Abnormal Files and only requires a moment of imagination to be completed. The "strong emotions and sincere wishes" required to achieve divine power and distortion can easily conflict with certain passages in the previous plot. Once the process is not fully explained, it is easy to create a sense of gap. Even the plot about Philip and Shao in the ruined library is a PPT-style passage. It only shows some things before and after the awakening without explaining the specific previous experiences of the characters in detail, so the foreshadowing that can be easily recycled is very important. 2. The indifferent and repressive city treats everyone equally and gives them pain. From mice to leaders, everyone is trapped in inner loneliness. Therefore, family love is both a reasonable key to breaking the lock and a difficult leash. This warm color is destined to be incompatible with the cold color as the background. Therefore, the "transformation" of the plot and characters requires unimaginable foreshadowing. Perhaps expanding the scope of imagination and introducing more concepts and forces will help. Finally, I wish the author good luck with his writing (⌒▽⌒)

It's a very good Tsukiki fanfic. Different from the time-travel protagonists in other books and all kinds of outrageous plug-ins, the protagonist of this book is a native urbanite, an ordinary person suffering from "urban disease". The plot is plain but not boring, and instead makes people look forward to the climax. The life of an urbanite who doesn't cheat. This is the most worthwhile thing to read in this book. In this era when cool writing is rampant, each one is as high as the sky. Works like this are even more surprising. The emotions in this book are described more delicately, and the author is very good at creating a certain atmosphere. Although the writing style is not particularly outstanding, it is very comfortable to read. Summary: It's a monthly plan fanfic that's worth reading. If I were to recommend a monthly plan fanfic, this one would be my first choice. Nowadays, most of the fanfics are essentially cool articles based on the settings, and the plots can be said to be the same. This book can better reflect the essence of "city" and can bring you a different experience.

I personally think this book is very good. As the first work of a new author, it is already very good or very rare. It has distinctive characters and rich plots (referring to original abnormalities and daily life). I have not read other books about lobe, but few other lobe books are as close to the lives and thinking of ordinary urban people as this book. Most of them are about key plot characters such as supervisor, secretary, and Angela. It unfolds as a main theme of salvation, but do these really make the protagonist grow? I can only say that it has grown but not much. The biggest charm of this book is that it is close to the daily life of ordinary company employees, and they grow step by step. As the protagonist grows up, he also gets to know many people, including ordinary company officials, as well as his comrades and ministers. It is the characters in these books who will become the protagonists in the future. They provide the foundation and support for the protagonist's growth. At the same time, the protagonist's relatives also provide indispensable support for his future growth. In my opinion, Lobotomy's greatest charm is its plot, its vivid characters, and those very interesting abnormalities. But in other books, I only saw boring plots. Maybe there was a little improvement in the plot, but not much. The characters are okay, but the charm of the abnormality, which is what attracts me the most, has never been brought out. What attracts me most about the Abnormalities in the game is the uncertainty of the Abnormalities, and their sense of unknown, mystery, power, weirdness, terror and oppression. But I haven't felt the above points in other books. On the contrary, the plot and atmosphere are very relaxed, casual and harmonious. There is no oppressive atmosphere in Lobe at all. The protagonists in other books travel to the city through the general process: becoming a supervisor or a close person, joining Lobe and becoming an employee (referring to the extremely unnatural ability to gain attributes) and follow the process to get rid of Abnormalities. After that, there are various ways to brush accessories, brush attributes, and brush equipment. Occasionally, I flirted with Angela, and then I got a group of fans or fans who were inexplicably confused. These are lobes of the brain! A place where someone could die at any time! I was also speechless. As the protagonist, he has prophetic attributes, so he can basically farm Abnormalities without any pressure. There are no casualties at all. If the protagonist's prophet attribute is removed, the protagonist will basically be useless.

It's a perfect book, unlike other system-invincible books that seem bland and boring. On the contrary, the daily life in the city is written very clearly. And the strength of the self-created abnormality is online. Nor is it purely invincible. I give you five stars, keep up the good work. [Like][Like]

Humor rating mechanism, more than 130 comments were all full stars, and the result was only a 7.2 Rating 666, humorous tomato The only shortcoming now is that there are too few and not enough to read, but the author's updates are really stable [Like] [Like]

It's good to watch, and the plot is not sluggish or sloppy, but I hope the essence is still free of CP. I hope the male protagonist can be unique. It feels weird to be with seniors. The big event will come soon, let the male protagonist become stronger, and the sister can be ignored. The combination with the rich lady is quite cute, with a faint fragrance of lilies [laughing] Nothing unexpected happens. As long as you keep updating, I will always follow your [Thinking]. The author is great. It is a rare good book about the Moon Plan. It does not break the combat power. I have read many books about the Moon Plan written by Tomato. They are either magically modified or the combat power is too outrageous. It is difficult to break down [face covering]

What a masterpiece! ! ! Even the pen and ink you wave at your fingertips are enough to eclipse the hard work created by vulgar people like us! Lively words, troubled life, cold body, suffering soul, magical stories, cruel reality... It analyzes the depressing and lonely atmosphere in the city in an ingenious way, but in an instant it vividly embodies the theme of Yueji - "Hope contained in despair". This masterpiece will forever be engraved in the history of the Ring, allowing countless belated comers to admire this pioneer who blazed the trail! And you - you can be called the guide of the gods. We sincerely invite you to become the leader of the ring and lead our group of believers who cannot escape from the worldly desires to go to the other side of the real art and create a world of elegance and art. (PS: Self-Designed Abnormality is so hot!!! Write it hard! I can't get enough!!! Two chapters a day is not enough!)

Lobe Company is a very interesting stand-alone work development game. The game is very warm, and it is not cold even in winter. There is nothing that makes people feel red. Abnormalities are also very friendly. The game is biased toward positivity, warmth and harmony. Players only need to extract energy to complete their daily work. NPCs will also help your company lay off employees every now and then. There are no knives. I highly recommend this game. , This game is really suitable for children who are timid and easy to break defenses, and there are blind boxes to give you little surprises every day, and there are doctors to help the employees, so Lobotomy Company is really fun. I really recommend it. If you encounter "Supervisor, Supervisor, Supervisor, Supervisor...", You must choose it, and "I will cure all diseases in the world, and you will be reborn." They are all very good abnormalities, so hurry up and play 🤓

The setting is very consistent with the setting of Lobotomy Corporation. I didn't know that Lobotomy Corporation had a branch before reading the comics (it's a bit ridiculous now that I think about it, after all, as a wing and a large energy company, how could it not have a branch) The character settings and abnormality settings are handled very well. Some paragraphs also reminded me of all the interesting things that happened when playing Lobotomy. And I think the interaction between the protagonist and the abnormality is the highlight of the book. When I was playing Lobotomy, I was also observing the comment column next to the employees at work. The author's imagination and logical thinking are very good to write such good interactions.