An Immortal Temp Worker at Limbus Company

Absolute immortality, the power born from it, reminds you of...

The writing is very good, as if the sinners in the article come to life. It feels very similar to the original article. But I am afraid that others will not read it because they see all the 5-star reviews, so I give it a four-star support.

The protagonist of this book follows the main plot of the Prison Bus. Currently, it seems that the protagonist is positioned as the team's favorite? Anyway, I have a good relationship with everyone. The protagonist is a constant fool with a simple heart. But his unique life experience makes it not monotonous even though it follows the main line.

I love watching it, but I think the main character could be strengthened a little bit [laughter]

A+... That's how you rate it, right? The younger brothers and sisters at home all love watching it! They made it so that they had to give up the family party just to watch the latest episode (heartbreaking). However, with the help of my younger brother, I witnessed the excellence of this animation with my own eyes today! Haha, I almost missed the treasure! We plan to in-app purchase the latest broadcast rights of your animation and watch it at family gatherings, haha! Tomorrow morning I will go to Amway to help other elder brothers and sisters~

In terms of plot: The basic plot of this book follows the main plot, so I do not evaluate the overall plot. This rating is only for the part of the plot originally created by the author. For this point, I can give the plot of this book a B+. The camp settings related to the protagonist can obviously be borrowed from Spider's Nest, but it is well adapted. The little finger who is keen on online debates and the thumb who is tolerant to his subordinates have good characters and plots, but there are still some shortcomings. Following the main plot means that most of the plot is Most audiences are familiar with it, and therefore the highlight of the main storyline for fan fiction should be the changes made by the protagonist to the plot. However, currently, except for the original plot, most of the changes made are not reflected in subsequent plots. For example, Yuri's survival is not mentioned in the follow-up. In the game, the death of a character means the disappearance of his role. In fan fiction, when the dead character in the original work has not died, the role still disappears, which is essentially the same as death. As for the language and characterization of the original characters: A+, there is no doubt that it is A+. Even if the original dialogues and events are completely followed, the characters' reactions are still in line with the character and language characteristics of the original work. The characters' reactions to the protagonist's special skills and experiences, including the reactions when they experience the same event together, will still not appear obtrusive when substituted into the original work. The final discussion of specialties in Luo Jia's chapter clearly shows the author's control of the original characters and the protagonist's personal language. Writing style: A, I saw someone in the book review area who said that some of the dialogues in this book may have been written by AI, but I can confirm that most AIs on the market probably cannot write such articles. I have used DeepSeek for a long time, and even used DeepSeek. He has written novels himself, but even if he emphasizes it every time it is generated, his language system still seems too rigid. This book does not feel that way. Tomato, which is widely used in AI novels, is relatively good, and it is very smooth to read. In short, it can be called an A. The slow update of works of this level is acceptable. As long as this quality can be maintained, one day you can become a master of a genre on your own.

The changes are still too small, especially Luo Jia's part of the plot has almost no changes except for the multiple Lu Fang and the protagonist.

I'm looking forward to how the protagonist will form a bond with everyone on the bus later on! 🤭

The setting of the protagonist is very novel, and the writing is also great! Like

I feel like it's very well written, and I don't feel that it's too toxic at the moment, but I feel that the popularity is very low, so I'm going to give it 5 stars in the hope that more people will read it later.