Limbus: The Clockhead's Redemption

The absolute author, the great story that came out of it, what does writing teach you...? Okay, no kidding. This book is quite worth reading. The characters are not OOC so far. By the standards of fan fiction, I can give this a B+ The plot follows the main line, but the author has added a lot of his own little ideas, plus some extras and extra content that are different from the main line, which brings about an earlier change in the feelings of everyone on the bus towards Dante. The reading does not make people feel boring and familiar. Generally speaking, it makes people feel comfortable, but some places are too stream-of-consciousness and broken. Some problems can be solved here. But there are some problems with the fusion of elements. First of all, I personally think that the esoteric religion and the urban atmosphere are a good match, whether it is the Violet Test during the Lobotomy Corporation period or the Gear Order shown in the ruined library. Secondly, the main problem in this aspect is the handling of the esoteric elements. Although the esoteric elements in this article appear as supporting characters, I still hope that the author can provide some explanations for some of the proper nouns, even in the comment area, because for some viewers they have never played the esoteric simulator, so they may not understand the setting of the forest and may be troubled by it. However, the author has downplayed it here, so overall it can be given a C+ The 3 factors combined give a score of B+. Considering that there are currently few books on the combination of Esoteric Cult and Border Bus, and the updates appear to be stable at the moment. So the final rating is A If you continue to create steadily, one day you will have a drink with other masters.

Seeing such a rare Tantra+Bashi text, I look forward to your work (Secret +1)

It is not easy to face two traffic locks at the same time, and it is rare for Tantra to be complete. I hope this history can become your greatest work, and I hope you can usher in the dawn)

Glow is a question, the moth always answers in the affirmative I follow the night watchman The glory belongs to the prison sheep

That's right. Dante is the one who can become my mother.

It's super pretty, has a warm feeling, and smells great! ! !

Beautiful, love watching. 😋😋😋. Come on, Laoyang! (I started reading it from Chapter 20. I am either waiting for the update or waiting for the update. It is very delicious, the male mother is excellent, and this Dante has a lot of strength, skills and teeth!

A+, Dante Mummy, delicious😋

It's great, it has a very warm feeling

It has unlimited potential, although it has not yet become a city star. But it is also a masterpiece among the dozens of monthly meter fanfics I have read.