The Yellow-Haired Man of the Otherworld: I Set Out to Dominate Bad Women

Starfish is generally very good, but the cool points should be highlighted and the changes should be obvious. Everyone watches male videos. A large number of readers don't want to read online novels as physical books such as prose, so they must be written clearly. As for the kind of readers who can recognize the wrong names, don't worry about it. Also, it's best to write down the background settings. There are conflicts between Class B and Class C. The previous writing is still very good, but it is obvious that the essence of the fighting scene has not been grasped. The arch of the foot is on the foot... When describing the fighting scene or other paragraphs that require a strong sense of substitution, add some emotion. At this time, you can use less bland narrative tone. Also, the conflict between the protagonist and Ishida Ayaka was not depicted in such a sharp way. For reference only, come on (ཽωེུ)

It's very good. The protagonist has very upright views and has the same morals as ordinary people. To put it metaphorically, he is like the protagonist of a pure love Japanese comic with a lifestyle style. The interaction between the protagonist and the girls written by the author is lively and interesting, and the emotional aspect is also very good. If you like life style comics with many girls, I can recommend this book at first glance. The plot is very rich and coherent, which makes people feel comfortable. The psychological description of the characters is also more delicate, and the interaction is very good. , Anyway, I laugh every time I see it. The appearance is also very good, which makes us readers full of imagination. By the way, the system words only play a key prop role and do not have a big presence in the book. In summary, the character portrayal: vivid and delicate, the plot: rich and smart, full of fun, and not lacking in a little bit of passion. I highly recommend you to watch it. The above is my opinion. If there are any deficiencies, please add more.

Read 32 books. There are 71 books to be read in the future. 160 Fantasy books. Technology (Fantasy) 38 books. 26 Books of mythology. City (high martial arts/superpowers/immortal cultivation) 158 copies. 66 Books of different worlds. Thriller/Rules 27. 35 Books daily. 55 Books in ancient times/Republic of China/modern times (imaginary). 62 Live broadcasts. 104 Volumes of female deities. Zongwu 20 copies. Villain 97. Weird 48 books. Weird 40 books. 35 Volumes of alien (animal) transformations. Urban 71. 32 Movies/TV series. 45 Comprehensive comics. 72 Volumes of animation (painting). 36 Books in the entertainment industry. 32 Adventure/wilderness/survival books. 32 Copies of Acting/National Destiny. 31 Game fanfics. 18 Games (production/esports/fusion). 45 (Serious) books. 43 Copies have been removed from the shelves. It's a pity (it was discontinued for various reasons and it was a good book that was finished) 72 books. There are 37 female videos. 23 Local Sese texts (I can just bear this kind of thing myself) ૮₍ ¬ ᴗ ¬₎ა

Okay, okay... The book is good, it warmed my body after reading it! [Face covering] I suggest you write more about healing! Recently... A little sad I wrote a little poem. If you don't mind, take a look! Thanks! [Sending Hearts] Have a quick drink The jade plate with turbid wine holds the clothes, and the eyes are moving and charming. When I was young, my love was as clear as a stream, but now my sorrow seems like empty confusion. The shape is beautiful, the closed moon is shy of the pond lotus, and the heart is hazy and full of sorrow. It's a pity that I won't be able to do it in this life. I will recommend the wine and drink the tea carefully.

Very good-looking, he and I are just a bitch and I just love reading this kind of cool articles! I used to be disgusted with harem love stories, but this book made me find myself! It turns out that I am still a Japanese comic fanatic and I love reading this type of manga! Finally found the type of cool articles I like to read!

The content of the plot is quite good, the revenge is tense, and it's a bit like meeting the evil girl next door in Tokyo, but the heroines are more likable than that one. The blood pressure in that one seems a bit high, and Xingquan's character design is exactly the same as that of Saki there. If it's just like that, don't confirm the relationship between the two so quickly like that one. After all, that one only has Saki Ichi in the early stage. He is a good person, but there are still quite a lot of likable characters in this book. You can pull them out a bit, otherwise there will be no chance for others to confirm the relationship with Xingquan directly. Forcibly entering will easily destroy the character. It is better to improve other people's favorability first. Next door is Pure Education and Training Revenge, but there are not so many villains in this book, so there is no need.

How to say it? The male protagonist has upright views and is a breath of fresh air in this kind of harem novel. His IQ is online throughout and his goals are clear. The characterization is also very distinct and should be impressive. I have read many books of the same type, but this one was the only one I felt comfortable reading. Come on! I believe that the author's writing style will definitely help this book reach the height it deserves.

I have read 51 chapters so far and they are all very interesting. There are many psychological descriptions and the descriptions are relatively delicate. I read Tomatoes with a 5000-hour guarantee. It is worth reading for book lovers.

It's really good, but updates slowly, one chapter a day. It feels like I've been reading it for a long time, but it just passed the 100th chapter. But I don't recommend reading it. If you don't read it, give the author a little reminder to update it, otherwise this guy really won't update it.

Surprisingly good, a rather refreshing plot, not too much nonsense, and handles the problems well. The main character's outlook is also very normal at present. I hope the author can write more heroines, and then the change in the main character's mentality will not be too sudden. [Blow a kiss] In short, good luck to the author