Star Iron: the Puppet Master Beside the Little Judge

Rating: 5 stars, but this is just my personal opinion. — Attachment: The first volume (supplementing the background for the protagonist) has about 32 chapters. If you don't want to read it, you can skip it yourself. It's not that there is no table of contents. If you read it before the author has written chapter 70, it is normal for you to complain about this point. But if you complain about this point after the author has written chapter 70, what is the difference between it and finding fault. ———————— Evaluation: The author's writing is very good, and it is basically good after the first volume. I didn't read the first volume, so I can't comment easily. Huo Huo probably appeared in Volume 2, and the serial number in the catalog is probably Chapter 38 (strictly speaking, it has already appeared in Chapter 37, but he was named in Chapter 38), so the frequency of appearing in the first 50 chapters is not high, but I can still Said, this is not a point to complain about. Without supplementing the background setting, some people will say that the author has written the protagonist's setting too sloppily. The first six chapters were written for the protagonist to have a serious identity in Xianzhou. It is not a good thing to enter too quickly. (Even though this book has Huo Huo as the single heroine) Overall, it's still very good, and it also fills in some of the pitfalls left by old rice (as long as you're not afraid of backstabbing). I dare say that this book can be considered a masterpiece. Even though there are some minor flaws, it is still a second creation, so the setting of the first creation should be respected and cited, but it should be expanded outward in an attitude that is objective and (as much as possible) consistent with the original work, rather than relying too much on the first creation. —— However, there are a few points that I still can't figure out: As the first living being with self-awareness in the universe (not sure if this is the original text), why is the Star God an "emotion"? This definition seems too broad and impractical. This seems to be contrary to the extremely rigorous (questionable) and difficult (questionable) attitude towards the birth of the Star God in Bengtie. However, the above questions do not have to be answered (I hope no one will misunderstand them as: I hope the author can directly and must answer these questions. Because I just raised them, and the author's job is only to add his settings to Bengtie's original worldview and expand the story). After all, it would not be good if it delayed the author's writing. ———————— Summary: The writing is very good, most of the settings are relatively consistent with the original design, but if you have time, I, a greedy reader, still hope you can add more! (If I may) Thank you. —————— Ps: For those readers who are deliberately looking for trouble, if you think the first volume is too trivial, you can skip it and start reading from the second volume. If you feel that there are fewer authors, please do not comment in a complaining tone, but try to comment in a normal tone, because the author seems to be only a high school student and has insufficient time, not to mention that he may be delayed in writing the novel due to other reasons. However, I still hope that this book will have enough readers so that the author will not be discouraged and slow down the update speed and ruin his mood (doubtful). Attachment: In fact, there are some inappropriate words in my evaluation, but I still hope you ignore them. Well, I think that the author's background setting for the protagonist can actually be less complicated. He can omit it to a certain extent, or even make a certain time span. After all, this will make it easier for you to make subsequent additional settings.

The writing is very beautiful, the relationship between the protagonist and Huo Huo is very natural, the setting is very interesting, and the package is of high quality. I will wait for the author to continue to update more of their stories, and we will continue to follow the book [Sending Hearts]

Ah? Only ten book reviews? Then I support the author, and the author's thank you for the support every time is exactly the same as before [face covering] Now I am too busy to send messages from readers. Each work has its own unique story, come on!

Beautiful, highly recommended!

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

The word count is super long, but it's super sweet.

Hey, hey, hey, I'm here again. Have you missed me? (It's best not to be seen by my sister, or I'll be doomed)

I am a person who prefers sweets, so eating something sweet is not too much!

It's very good-looking. If the word count is high and the quality is high, it will definitely be a book rated 9 or above.

It's really good, the author is also very active, and the book is not boring [smile][smile][smile]

Whether as a writer or a reader, there is always something worth learning from this book. [Sending Hearts] As a writer, the recent data is really bad. I really don't know if I should persist. Therefore, I support every warrior who dares to create and persist.

It's a bit messy to be honest, but it's okay

What does this book have to do with Beng Tie and Huo Huo giving birth to a little fox for me? @Confession under the meteor shower

In terms of plot, it can be above average and Huo Huo has relatively few fans. I hope he won't die suddenly in the middle. Good luck, author.

So sweet and very pretty

It doesn't matter so much, it just looks good.

It's been so long since I've read a book review

A very embarrassing novel

Yes Yes Very Yes One

This is relief food given by the imperial court

Very nice and recommended

Very nice, I like it very much Very beautiful. I love watching it! Why is the rating only 7.0?

Good, good, good, good

Very beautiful, very good, [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It looks good, I love watching it, I still watch it

Nice looking hehehehe

It's so cool, keep writing.

Very good, keep up the good work

A good book and a good read

It's beautiful, no need to say anything [laughs]