Honkai: Star Rail: The Preservation Emanator from Belobog

I’m new to writing, and this is my first time. Please point out anything that could be improved. Thank you.

Guys, I’ve edited some of the long passages in the first few chapters. If anything feels uncomfortable to read, just let me know in the comments.

[This is really just the story of one being among countless others in the Honkai: Star Rail universe. He has no ability to foresee the future and no other memories. All he has is the desire to make his home prosperous. Though the protagonist has an Emanator’s strength, he’s just a boy who has only recently come of age. He’ll do whatever he can to protect his companions. A dozen years is still far too short a time in Honkai: Star Rail, especially since he hasn’t even spent as much time in the universe as Stelle has.]

[Here’s an update: when we reach Amphoreus, the “War of the Gods” will begin. The Lord Ravagers will gather, the Amber Lord will make an appearance, and Aha will come to the rescue.]

[So my companions need not face the “sun’s” wrath, I will shield them, building a wall of protection with my own body.]

[Even if my body is shattered by it, the will called [Preservation] will never fade.]

[The “sun’s” wrath will bring them nothing but warmth. Though the old tree may rot, the “nutrients” it leaves behind will help the new branches reach for the sky.]

[They will move toward a place untouched by fire. The “sun” will only be a tool to help them on their way.]

[A shattered body is not the end. It will sow the seeds of Preservation anew. Time will gather that will into amber, and the “sun’s” wrath will only refract the spectrum of Preservation.]

[When Belobog’s “future” touches the amber called Landau, it will hear faint echoes in the wind: in countless shattered moments, the will called “Preservation” has never gone out.]