Honkai: Star Rail: The Preservation Emanator from Belobog

I'm new to writing, and this is my first time. Please point out anything that could be improved. Thank you. Guys, I revised some of the longer passages in the first few chapters. If anything still feels awkward to read, just let me know in the comments. [This is really just the story of one being among countless others in the Honkai: Star Rail universe. He has no power to foresee the future and no other memories. All he has is a desire to make his homeland prosperous. Though the protagonist has the power of an Emanator, he is only a boy who has just come of age. He will do what he can to protect his companions. A dozen years is still far too short a time in Honkai: Star Rail, especially since he has spent less time in the universe than Stelle has.] [Here's a little heads-up: when the story reaches Amphoreus, the “War of the Gods” will begin, with the Lord Ravagers gathering, the Amber Lord making an appearance, and Aha coming to the rescue.] [So my companions would not have to face the “sun's” wrath, I would shield them all and build a rampart of protection with my own body.] [Even if my body is shattered in the process, the will known as [Preservation] will never fade.] [The “sun's” wrath will bring them nothing but warmth. Though the old tree may decay, the “nourishment” it leaves behind will help new branches reach for the sky.] [They will head toward a place untouched by flames. The “sun” will only be a tool to help them move forward.] [A shattered body is not the end. It will continue to sow the Core Flame of Preservation. Time will condense that will into amber, and the “sun's” wrath will only refract the spectrum of light belonging to Preservation.] [When Belobog's “future” touches the amber known as Landau, it will hear a faint echo carried on the wind: the will known as “Preservation,” which never went out amid countless shattered moments.]