The Pretty One of the Black Brothers

Give yourself a score and everyone is welcome to comment. Lyla is not a perfect character. Since the Potters have an old daughter and an older brother, she will be relatively pampered. And although she does not agree with the pure-blood theory, she also has Slytherin ambitions and will have her own career. The other characters in the original work are not black and white. I hope everyone can continue to read it. Sirius's personal charm lies in his unrestrained and unrestrained, daring to love and hate, but he also says the wrong things, talks back to the girl he likes, and expresses love in the wrong way. Regulus has always been a character that I feel sorry for, and I assure you that there will be more plots behind him. And Sirius would also see what Regulus had done, instead of misunderstanding that he was no different from other Death Eaters. About 80,000 to 100,000 words are written in a school year. It is not easy to write a long article. I hope everyone will support me.

The author's writing is so good that I read it overnight last night. I very much agree with the author's point of view. The HP world created by Rowling is like a real existence in my mind. Every character is flesh and blood. Just like the real world, no one is perfect. Just like the most typical Dumbledore, he is called the greatest white wizard. People's first reaction is that the white wizard is an absolutely good person, but in fact, Dumbledore also had evil in his heart. In that summer of confusion and love, it was the death of his sister that made him "awake". On this AI-supported platform (because 🍅hp has a lot of fanfics [crying], so I won't give up on finding excellent fanfics), this book is really great, but I'm tired of waiting for it to be serialized [crying] [crying]

A very complete and informative story with a wonderful climax. Both male protagonists have very good characters and love Laila very much (I personally prefer Regulus, he is such a perfect image). The best HP fanfic I have ever seen. It's not just the so-called writing stories for the sake of falling in love, it's very meaningful. Looking forward to Rael's extras!

Very interesting, looking forward to the next episode I wonder if the ending of Regulus and Sirius will be the same as the ending of the original novel. Rael, please don't [cry][cry]

The beginning is a little dull, but the middle and climax parts are great. Although I personally prefer Regulus, the current extra chapter has not written about him. Personally, I think Lyra's days as an undercover agent, wandering between the Dark Lord and the Order of the Phoenix, completely fit everyone's characters, and the description of the final battle is the climax of the entire book. Spoilers involved: Snape's potion that overdrawn Voldemort, Lyra finally released the reversal of the Patronus, and everyone including Remus, Regulus, James, etc. Struggled to stay alive and desperately fought against Voldemort. It can be said that the victory of the final war was the result of everyone's combined efforts. (Peter's description is very consistent with his character. He was not taken seriously and chose to betray. It is surprisingly true.)

Super pretty! ! I have read Chapter 335 so far, and it really gets better and better the further you read, especially after Lyla and Sirius broke up. Everyone became particularly mature in an instant, and the plot moved forward quickly. Coupled with the urgency of Voldemort's doom, the emotional changes were especially delicious. At this time, Lyla was strong and determined. The layout is stable, and vulnerability and fear are intertwined. The growth line of the heroine is really great. In the early stage, Laila is a cute and sparkling baby. She has a firm goal in imagining her future career. What flashed in my mind was the hot girl sweetheart in the American TV series. In the middle stage, Laila found herself being involved in the whirlpool. She was scared but at the same time, being in love gave her peace of mind. In the later stage, Laila forced herself to cut off love and lock up love in order to protect her family. She was so strong that it was so scary that her reason was terrible. It's really good to watch, and the pulling of the two Blakes' love lines is also very delicious😋

It's super pretty, but there's just too little of it (please ask me if you want to know anything)

I quite like it, and the content is quite exciting, but the only drawback is that I prefer the Rael card, but the heroine Siris likes it more, which makes me a little unsatisfied. Also, why is it not being updated? Why is it discontinued? 😡

It's totally magical... It's my first time to write a review. To be honest, in the early days in school, it was mainly about the heroine's potion research and daily life with friends and lovers. I even felt a little bored watching it. The heroine's character was not particularly attractive to me, but!! In the middle period, the main plot broke out quickly. Not only was it not abrupt, but it was very tense. I swear this is the best main plot I have ever seen in an HP fan. The growth of the heroine and other characters is very well written. I am running out of words. Anyway, it is very interesting to watch.

Nice! I think the characters are well-developed and the plot is very smooth. The emotional and story lines are also well intertwined. I am so lucky that the author seems to have updated the book [shy] and I personally particularly like the Rael line. I look forward to it!