Flying Thunder God from the Start: Isn't This Idiot Shameless?

It's good. Generally, comedy novels are not too poisonous. This one is the same. The content is still interesting. It's not the kind of novel that just piles up jokes. I gave it four stars because the author wrote too little, please update soon.

I suggest the author take a look. There were indeed a lot of bad points at the beginning, but now we can really see that the author's writing skills are slowly improving. The comedy part is pretty good among similar novels. In terms of combat, as long as there are no random things like other organizers looking for trouble in the early stage or sudden highs and lows like Chapter 178, you can maintain a stable output. As for whether there is a female protagonist, in fact, what everyone is afraid of is that the female protagonist will steal the scene, or the emotional line will cause the plot to collapse and deviate from the battle plot. My suggestion is to have no female protagonist, because Qin Bai's plot in the early stage is a solo mode, and it would be difficult to write a sudden female protagonist. Even for Ai Weiwei, the gap in strength between her and the protagonist is too big, which makes people feel unworthy. Even if she is reinforced later, she is only a support position, and it is easy for people to say that she is a god. Moreover, there are several novels with female protagonists in the same genre that are much better than yours. Those are veterans, and it is easy to suffer losses when competing with them. Regardless of the plot or market conditions, having no female protagonist is a relatively good choice. There are currently more female characters, and I suggest more male characters, because this is a male video, and readers would prefer the protagonist's environment to be more male-oriented. Of course, it's not that there should be no female characters, but there are too many female characters now, which can easily affect the perception.

It's a very good book. The funny bits are not far-fetched and very natural. Moreover, the author's characterization is very detailed, and there are no two characters that seem to be similar to each other. I also read the author's previous book, but I don't know why I can't see it anymore. All in all, this book has nothing poisonous and is interesting. I highly recommend it [Like]

Funny to read when you're bored, highly recommended! !

It is still very good, the plot is funny, the protagonist is invincible and strong, there is not much frustrating content, and there is no plot that licks the characters. However, the author's writing needs to continue to work harder. Everything else is pretty good. I personally like it very much. It's just that the update is a bit slow. You may need to read more, otherwise you may not be able to enjoy it.

The plot is good-looking, and there are very few poisonous points, almost none. However, there are still quite a lot of errors such as missing words, too many words, typos, word order changes, word order changes, paragraphs that do not make sense, and the context is not connected. Especially the few words, too many words, and typos, especially affect the reading experience. I hope the author will continue to work hard! The plot is really good. If you ignore the above, it is worthy of being a five-star masterpiece.

It's very interesting. I watched nearly half of it. I feel that the setting of the Tongxinhui is very enjoyable. Everyone is mixed together for profit, even if they know that colluding with foreign races will not have good results, they can get temporary pleasure. Strong guys can protect themselves, and low-strength guys enjoy protection. The foreseeable future is not important, and temporary happiness is the real meaning.

This book is very enjoyable to read so far. It has many funny jokes. But the stalks are too dense. If there are no new stalks to fill in, it will be boring if the repetitive stalks are written all the time. I hope the author will update more, but the article context and outline should be planned in advance to attract more traffic.

Personally, although this book is not particularly good-looking, it is considered a high-quality book in Tomato. I suggest that the protagonist be given some interesting abilities, such as Dragon Ball's transformation technique, Naruto's shadow clone, Fairy Tail's word magic with added magic, Prince of Tennis' brilliance, and the tutor's illusions.

It's a very good book, but I don't know if it has a female protagonist. It would be better if there is a female protagonist.