The Outcast: Forging Artifacts to Ascend to Immortality

Thirty-four chapters that I read during the deadline for rating: I can correct my mentality, don't be a dog for everyone, don't lick Feng Baobao, don't be a nanny, don't force the main plot, and don't have any weird magical second settings. It didn't go as well later on, so I retract my initial review.

It's good to read. Don't be misled by the author's introduction. He's a novelist who knows far too much about introductions [smile][smile][smile]

Under One Person is the most interesting fanfic. Only the protagonist of this book can be considered a real cultivator. This is called dual cultivation of life and life. Moreover, it is so consistent with the original work. In addition to the protagonist being a time traveler and the prophetic changes to the story, what the protagonist does in the text, you just It is added to the original work now, so there is no problem for such a person to appear. Unlike other fanfics, they are either purely cool and systematic, like Zhao Nian trapped in the inner scene, or there are too many unreasonable things with the original work. Some of them are well written, but they are completely different from the foreshadowing stories of the original work. This is the only book that perfectly solves these two problems that often arise in the fan fiction of Under One Person. Needless to say, it is great.

It's really good and beautiful! ! ! Rather than blindly participating in the plot or being a nanny, I have my own secondary setting. I really like the character of the protagonist. He has ideas and restraint. He has had a general idea of ​​his own path since he created his own cultivation method. Then, step by step, through the guidance of the older generation such as Old Man Yuan and Lao Tianshi, as well as conversations with his peers, he will clarify and improve his own path step by step. Really good! ! ! !

Come on, after reading it, I feel that this is a good quality book among Yiren, and the aspect of weapon refining is still quite rare in Yiren fandom. Most of them are using the divine mask or going to Taoism, and I don't know if there is a precedent for the weapon refining. Most of the Yiren weapon refining books seem to start by going straight to Biyou to learn Shenji. This is the first book I have personally seen to learn and innovate by myself. Come on! ! !

The structure is clear, it seems smooth, and it has an independent point of view. Although it does not have an amazing idea, it handles interpersonal relationships and self-awareness very well. It is a good article. I personally think it's worth a look and not a waste of time.

The book ends very quickly, but it's not too rushed. Everything that needs to be explained is explained. As a fanfic, it's well written and very creative. The author also has his own understanding of the original work, and the ending he chose is appropriate so as not to conflict with the original work. Overall, it's a relatively comfortable book. I recommend it.

It is very worthy of my five stars, very creative, not cliche and very refreshing. Plus he's the same as the original. Taoist thought is also relatively strong. Add more fun. It's a pity that this good book is delayed by his name and preface.

A particularly excellent work. I guess the reason why it didn't get a rating of 9 is because it's a bit serious. From the lines in the book, it can be seen that the author has a deep research on Taoist thought. However, in this era of impetuous per capita, it is not enough to be "diode" and go to extremes, so the score has been lowered.

The author has worked hard. This is one of the better-written novels I have read in "Under One Person". Although the chapters are not long and the ending is short and stubby, the description is not abrupt, which shows the sincerity of the author who does not want to give in. Bookworms express their respect. The article uses the protagonist's mouth to explain the principles of spiritual practice and the philosophy of life, including self-salvation in a bad situation and unique insights into how to deal with the world. It is based on the comic book "Under One Person" and does not make any magical changes or copy it mechanically. It also intersperses with embellished and colorful changes, which shows that the author's writing skills are outstanding. Nowadays, when writing novels, there is less nonsense and concise writing style, which is really rare. Not to mention free reading, why is it too meaty? I look forward to the next good article.