What If You Had a What-If System

Faster, faster, more, I can't live without you😭😭😭💔💔💔 (reviewed by a 10-year old bookworm, The writing is first-class, the characters are well created, and the plot is well arranged. The entire novel not only contains fictional events, but also the author's own philosophical thoughts. It makes people feel like they are not just reading a fictional novel, but communicating with the author through the novel and understanding the thoughts expressed by the author. It makes people deeply feel that they are communicating face-to-face with the author, rather than those AI The novel, the whole novel is more real. It makes people not forget about it like those online articles and cool articles. It is meaningless. After reading it, you will occasionally think deeply in reality. This is something that online articles cannot achieve.) (How do you feel that you are writing Chinese reading comprehension? [Thinking]. Finally, I highly recommend reading it. It will not be as samey and brainless as those cool articles.) (This is the first time I write such a long short composition~(¯▽¯~)~)

First of all, I have already finished reading this book when I wrote this review. 1. The title of the book is very cliché. At first glance, it gives people the feeling of a cool article. There is nothing wrong with this, but the article you wrote is not a cool article. This will make people who like to read cool articles click in, and then they will not be able to adapt to the negative reviews. 2. The plot of the story is average, the writing is average, and many emotional aspects are not written, which is a big failure for now. 3. The content and ideas of the article are very unique, which is worth recommending, but it is greatly inconsistent with the title of the book and is difficult to understand. 4. The system has been written so far. As far as the article I read is concerned, it is a very new "system". The dialogue and abilities are different from usual ones. 5. The arrangement of the characters and plots is not very good. For example, the ending and plot arrangements of Cat Mom are very disappointing. Finally, the update speed is a big problem. It would be okay if it were divided into volumes, but the ordinary plot is very worrying. Out of 10 points, currently, I give it 7.9 Points, please update

The writing style is excellent and the articles are in-depth. Every story draws me in unconsciously. It can be put on any platform. As long as you maintain your current status, you will definitely become a great master.

First of all, the writing is good, but there is one biggest problem, which is that most of the readers attracted by the title should want to read what if I could be immune to nuclear radiation, what if 50 million Tyrannosaurus rex appeared on the earth, and what if I could control water at will. However, what the author writes about is what if I become something. Once or twice is okay, but so far those outrageous abilities have not been written. I don't know what the author's plan is, but I feel that most of the readers attracted by the title of the book will run away. I hope the author can reply

I have finished reading it. I have caught up to the latest chapter. The setting is good and the plot is also very good. I missed it several times because I was persuaded by the first few lines of the first chapter. It is not bad, but it is not amazing enough. In addition, there is no rating for my first sense. I want to say sorry to the author. The title of the book actually always feels good, but I can't put it into words. Overall, you will be addicted after reading the first three chapters.

Personally, I feel very good about it. The big story is a story that takes place in a parallel universe. The protagonists play different roles and do different things for the world.

Take a look, it's pretty good. You'll understand once you've seen it, how I feel now

Waiting for 9 points, write well, no poison so far

It's great to watch, the world of cats is so easy to cry 😭

Very well written