Dream of the Red Chamber: The Greatest Literary Minds Under Heaven

The latest 80 chapters, a Red Mansion fanfic, but the content is more time-traveling than family gossip. The writing is excellent and the descriptions are vivid. The protagonist has a pleasant personality step by step. The rhythm is progressive and exciting. It feels a bit like reading the Yue Guan book. There is currently no female lead, but there should be one. Five stars for encouragement. [Learned] I've finished watching it, and it's a three-star rating. The book is actually really good. At least the writing, the characters, and the knowledge base far exceed that of the novice author. However, there are two serious problems. The first is that it is unfinished, and there is no need to explain this. Even if you write it in ink, if you can finish it completely, it is a unique style of book. Maybe some people are like this, but if you just cut it in half and don't write it, there will be nothing to say, and it will be deducted stars. Second, the writing style is very self-contained and does not care about the reader's experience. Comments always talk about water, but in fact this is really not water. What is water? Too much is useless, water is called water if it is bland and tasteless. I drank a large bottle without tasting anything. This book is not watery, but it has a huge amount of expanded content, which greatly affects the viewing experience. His expanded content is different from others. In a normal book, the expanded content is appropriately interspersed with the plot to make it easier for readers to read. But this book, I would like to express my personal feeling, is purely for self-pleasure and to teach others. It quotes all kinds of classics and allusions. For example, if you watch a costume drama, 18 minutes out of a 20-minute episode are extended content. The protagonist goes out, opens the door, and inserts a short documentary to tell you why the threshold is so high. A video is inserted to tell you about the style of shoes. As soon as the camera switches to the street, a beggar enters the street and is immediately inserted to tell you how the beggar came, the current situation in the world, and people's livelihood... The protagonist moves twice in 20 minutes. I know a lot of miscellaneous knowledge. He himself showed off his wealth of knowledge by quoting from other sources. The reader felt as if his mother had drunk fake wine when reading a novel. He could cut off three or four chapters after reading a chapter. [Eat melon]

The language and plot are very good, but there are too many expanded contents, which somewhat affects the smoothness of the plot. It is also too professional and makes the viewer dizzy. Those who like archeology may like the expanded knowledge, but most people will either browse it in a hurry or skip it. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. Overall it is still very good. If you have the patience to look at it, you can learn a lot.

The writing is pretty good. I was originally not interested in this kind of Red Mansions novel without extraordinary power, but I kept recommending it back and forth. I clicked in to take a look. After reading it, I felt that this type is also very good.

In fact, it is undeniable that the author's writing style is very good, but most of the comments are criticizing the author's word count. After reading it, he expressed his understanding. The author actually wanted to express some of his own opinions, some about the Red Mansion, and some about his insights on life. However, I have to say that this is Tomato, and reading cool articles is the mainstream. There are not many plot twists and turns within three to five chapters, so it is easy to be disliked. There are so many novels that I can't finish them all. There are also many choices for everyone, so I don't have a lot of patience. If you want to retain readers, you can only rely on small plots that keep appearing. Personal sentiment, the author does not need to pay attention to it, come on😊

The writing was so good, but suddenly it was tied. It was too short and not enough to read. I just wanted to stop reading it, but my interest was aroused. It felt like other people in the novel chasing the divine eagle🥲. I urged it to update it, and it was not enough to read. Now I wanted to find a replacement article. But this is the first time I saw an article written by a Red Mansion fan on Tomato. It feels hard to find it🥹🥹🥹

This is the best Red Mansion fanfic I've ever seen. It's nice and interesting. I hope it's free of cp.

I admire the author's profound historical and cultural knowledge. The historical and cultural cross-descriptions in the book are really beneficial. Although how to write is the author's mental structure, according to the writing routine of online articles, too many brief descriptions in the article will inevitably affect the perception.

The writing is very good, but it is too detailed and the plot development is slow. Those who are impatient may not watch it.

There's nothing wrong with shooting the eagle, but if you write about the little dragon girl with the eagle, you'll be beaten to death, right? [Smile]

The article is rigorously conceived, and the protagonist is Jia Yun. Very few people write about this character, and it is worth recommending.