Showbiz: This Director Is Incredibly Productive

The author's writing is good, and the plot is well-structured! Overall, it's a comfortable read. The only drawback is the two ambiguous younger sisters; their roles are completely unclear. I've read over ten chapters so far, and I've found that the story flows better without them.

I read a few chapters, and I'm giving it four stars because it's different from other formulaic stories. I have no interest in watching a fourteen-year-old start a restaurant business. With hundreds of movies and TV series to his name, what kind of restaurant are you even running?

Seriously, what are those two twelve-year-old kids doing? They rely entirely on the protagonist for food, clothing, and shelter, and then act all high and mighty? Many kids from orphanages know how to read people's faces. The protagonist is also incredibly cowardly, and the pacing is way too fast. He's already acting and making movies in high school, and then he comes along asking to borrow 50,000 yuan... Sigh, never mind.

It's alright, just don't write it like a harem novel, and don't create too many concubines.

There are too many flaws. The shop's revenue and expenses aren't explained, the acting isn't described, and there's no female lead. Where's the appeal of this book?

The plot itself isn't too bad, but after two short films, there's no need to make more. They should be making a feature film, especially since they're all horror films. This makes them easily labeled as only capable of making horror movies. Why not wait until they win an award to sell the films? The price could be higher then. The protagonist's attitude is a bit cowardly.

An ordinary person without the ability to enhance their memory wouldn't be able to film it, even if given a script. Directors of good films are at least highly capable; ordinary people don't have that talent.

It's too drawn out; a lot of writing effort is wasted on unimportant parts. It takes over 30 chapters to finally film a short documentary – "A Bite of China." This writing style is completely unrelated to the novel's title.

The name is too unpleasant to look at. There's no need to be so superstitious. Other people have similar names and are fine. Everything here is changed except the sound; it's so awkward.

My friend and I left you a message at the end of Chapter 18. Please take a look when you have time. Thanks and keep up the good work!