Reforming Showbiz, Starting as a Rookie Screenwriter

This is the first entertainment industry article that I have completely read on Yang Persimmon. The highlights of this article are: ① It does not start from the perspective of a star, but starts from the screenwriter. It also reflects the lack of logic and serious water injection in today's TV drama scripts. ②The protagonist of this article is based on his strength and the perfection of the script as the best buying points of the drama, rather than the comfort of individual novels I have read before. Although this book can be considered a good read, the main character does not have a strong background at the beginning. Instead, he comes out of it step by step. It's refreshing but not obtrusive. ③The protagonist of this article takes one step at a time and accomplishes his goal without being anxious. At the same time, the protagonist is also very decisive and is sure to hit every hit. When I was a kid, I would never let go of the TV series. Reading the author's description, it felt like I was going back to the time when I was watching TV series. Of course, this is also the first novel that I have finished following the serialization. I keep talking a lot and don't know what to say anymore. Anyway, the author writes very well [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I look forward to the next novel.

Looks good! I like to read this kind of original scripts the most. I have always felt that the ones written by Wenzhaogong are not bad. However, if it is just a simple retelling of a classic, why don't I just watch the classics directly? I particularly like the author's portrayal of the heroine, and hope to write more!

I haven't skipped a chapter. I just love this original script👍🏻. Although the data in it is exaggerated, it is a novel after all. Isn't it allowed to be unrestrained? I hope there will be more. The original script in it feels like it was written alone. It feels like it will be made into a drama!

It's good to watch. First of all, there is no female competition in the whole story, the plot is reasonable, there are no inexplicable brainless villains, and the design of the drama within the drama is also very careful. Many entertainment industry articles will have a chance to admire the protagonist's Bole in the early stage. However, in the early stage of this book, each platform chose the heroine because of their own interests, rather than appreciation and importance. I feel that this plot design is very reasonable. It develops steadily in the middle period, but the ending in the later period is a bit too hasty. I feel that I can continue writing. I really want to see the stars shine at the end. But I can understand it after seeing the author's choice. Fortunately, it is at least a smooth implementation. The intermediate system provides technology and shares, which is a bit of a cheat, but there seems to be no good way to break the situation. Other methods will also stretch the battle line too long, which may cause the plot to drag out. All in all, the flaws are not hidden, I like it

I personally like this style. The female lead team works hard and there are not many random people. The only small point is the yellow director. I feel that the author may want to write that he is very capable, so he was chosen. But in fact, I think the author's description later is that the female lead is in charge. He directed most of the big scenes, but Huang still had a lot of small details that needed to be taken care of by the heroine. Then there were more big scenes in that drama, and he took on the main work, but as for directing, he is counted above Director Huang, and judging from the previous description, I feel that his ability is not special. It's outstanding and makes people feel uncomfortable, and I think the author can consider letting the heroine film the script she wrote, because the heroine herself is a screenwriter, she knows best what she wants, and she also has the ability to direct, so she can actually consider letting the heroine become a screenwriter and director. Unless you really can't shoot the script yourself and then consider giving it to others to shoot, most of the scripts are still expected to be shot by the heroine herself. Of course, the above are just my small suggestions, the author can adopt them or not. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and code words. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It's good-looking and novel, but it's a drama if the average collection is 100 million, hahahahahahahahaha

It's okay, it just smells like a girl's video without any early writing. Although the smell is not very strong, it is still noticeable. The main manifestation is that each character is very brainless when making decisions. They all make decisions with a slap on the thigh. For example: I didn't even watch the main character's movie, so I decided not to take it or take it; I didn't even read the script of the main character's new movie, and didn't get it back to the company for evaluation, etc., But I decided to invest in the new movie on the spot when I heard that the main character had a new movie; I didn't even know what the main character's new movie was about, but I decided to star in the movie, and I didn't check whether I was suitable or not. Also, the struggle between the protagonist and the villain looks pretty good, but in fact many of them are about public criticism. Sometimes it seems very childish and looks a bit like the plot of a female idol drama. Overall, the problem is not big. It is just a female-channeled entertainment novel with ordinary content. For a women's video article, it has obvious advantages and can arouse readers' emotions to a greater extent. Although there are disadvantages, they are not very big.

I read this book in one day, and it is relatively short. Reading more than a hundred chapters in one go will definitely make you want to continue reading. Of course, there are also shortcomings, such as: the plot level is thin, the protagonist and other characters are not fleshed out enough, and the focus is on career but not on characters. But there are quite a lot of advantages. Let me just talk about the most attractive one: the heroine has been engaged in career throughout the whole process. Although the characterization is weak, the heroine's career has no unnecessary twists and turns. The success of the work is only the best in the article! Be stronger! Stronger! Very strong! He is a figure who is like a god (only in terms of the plot in the article). The word count is small, the plot is fast-paced, but the plot is relaxed and relaxed. I gave four stars because the chapters are a bit short, the original script is average in description, and the characters in the text are dull. After reading one chapter, I forgot who the characters were. But in short, it is still worth reading. If it is about entertainment topics, I will actively recommend this book. You won't feel like you're wasting your time after watching it. [Review statement: My comments are all based on subjective feelings. The comments are only for friendly communication. Friends with different feelings are welcome to communicate. ]

It's rare to see someone without a copywriter. The scripts that appear in the article are all original, which is quite surprising. Due to the short length, there are only eight detailed scripts, six of which are written by the female protagonist. The genres are campus, infinite apocalypse, fairy tales, legal dramas, ancient monsters and history. The descriptions of the scripts are quite detailed, and the general content is written down. The remaining two are scripts that the heroine received from small screenwriters in order to expand the studio: urban struggle and suspense. Although it is a novel world, there are not many parts about the original male and female protagonists. Most of the system's functions are only to provide material help, and the scripts are all original by the female protagonists. I deducted one star because I personally think the novel is a bit bland, and the scripts are all original, so the sense of immersion is not very strong.

The overall review is pretty good. If you like this type of movie, you can give it a look. Plot: It revolves around the career of the heroine. There is no very toxic emotional drama, but the plot is too bland. It is all about writing the script, then filming and then the effects. There weren't any big waves. I even thought about whether I might develop into making movies later, but nothing like that happened abroad. Moreover, there are still holes that have not been filled. The screenwriter, husband, director, and wife will not say how effective the film is. If it has no effect, why write it? She also promised the original heroine that she would be the heroine in a drama, but she never wrote it. It just doesn't feel like you can read it all in one go, it's just bland.