Mass-Produced Mages of Steel Magic

The standard Western fantasy novels or those mecha anime from my childhood have become novels. The images are strong, the plot is reasonable and the context is clear, the battle descriptions are excellent and the growth of the protagonist can be clearly seen, but remember to read it with your eyes and brains. To be honest, your daily writing is not very good. When you first went to the battlefield, your daily life was very good. It was like the protagonist adjusting to the tense atmosphere of the battlefield. After he tested the mecha for the first time in school, the professor asked him to continue. However, the reason the protagonist did not continue was that he would be injured, and in the recently updated chapters, he was not afraid of getting hurt. The male protagonist has a personal psychological conflict, and it was the first time that the male protagonist faced that professor. The professor scolded him. He didn't retaliate. This was actually normal, but it gave people a depressing feeling. Since he didn't retaliate after being scolded, what should I say? It just felt like he was a coward. And for a person who can play back and forth with the opponent's ace, wouldn't the professor know? Also, even if you die for research, you should do it, and you have to obey his bullshit orders. All in all, the professor is not well portrayed, and the overall daily life is boring. What about the interaction with the heroine? You can go about your daily life, but the daily life of reading a book in the library and trying out the mecha for Professor SB is very boring and depressing. The daily life is warm and not depressing. The interaction with the heroine should give people a kind of relaxation like coming home after work. Don't be depressed. The protagonist is too cowardly and doesn't know his own value at all. The ace-level magister who was able to fight the ace back and forth and beat him was always popular wherever he went. When he went to Flan, he directly raised the conditions without even taking action. Flan must have agreed because the sword was in their own hands and not in the hands of others. That was enough. In this way, he could always have the so-called vacation.

Ah, I feel like I've been reading Tomato for so many years just for this kind of novel. It's so enjoyable to watch. It would be better if it wasn't time travel. I hope it won't end badly. I will read it with advertising support. Come on [Sending Hearts]

Among similar novels (magical air combat with a World War II background), this is probably the best one I have read, especially the description of the battle scenes, which is very immersive and emotionally resonant. The only shortcoming at present is that the protagonist's behavior is not motivated enough, and the protagonist integrates into the world a little too quickly. However, this is also a common problem in fast-paced time travel novels. The flaws are not concealed, and it is worth collecting and updating.

I have read Chapter 20 so far, and I really like the plot. But I feel there is a little problem: when two people are having a conversation, two consecutive sentences by the same person are divided into two sentences and placed in two quotation marks. I originally thought it was two people alternating one sentence, but after reading it, I felt something was wrong. It took me a while to understand it.

There's a battle, there's Gundam, there's Tanya, come and watch [Blow a kiss]

Good news, Season 2 of Tanya will be released next year [Blowing Kisses]

It's a great subject matter. Whether it's about war or daily life, it's obvious that the author has written carefully. He must have made a lot of preparations before writing. There is no omission in the description. The author does not just want to write a story that makes people happy. The pace is not fast, there are many details, and there are some immature places, but the problems are not big. All in all, this is a novel that is worth looking forward to.

It's well written, it feels like Lelouch and Tanya, but it's just too little now. I suggest the author change the name. If you bring mecha, more people may read it. To be honest, the content of the book with your current name has little to do with magicians. It is basically about mecha combat.

Although there are many typos and grammatical errors, the plot of this anime is very attractive and good to watch.

The world view is quite complete, and the war theme and character creation are quite good. I really like the part about Seele. I have to say, are you sure the author won't change the name of Honkai Impact? [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]