Despair from the Start! Save the Witch and Become Her Commander!

There are a lot of things to complain about, but let me tell you in advance that I think it's still very interesting. I feel that the plot moves forward a little too fast. The fatal crises can indeed arouse the readers' emotions, but it is a bit too compact. When the fatal crises come one after another, and then the passionate confession of life and death comes just after the end, it will be really numb. While the plot advances too fast, the progress of the protagonist group does not seem to keep up. The male protagonist seems to have been on the road of being educated and educated, and he likes to rush alone after being ambushed. Villain creation: To be honest, just by looking at the introduction and opening content, you might think that the enemy will be the Zerg, but in fact, the most significant presence of the Zerg is the Knight level at the beginning, and everything else has a sense of déjà vu. Crisis often comes from within. For a world where humans are killed to the point where only survivors can be said to be the only ones left, it can only be said that humans are a bit abstract. They keep shouting about the pressure of the Zerg, and then continue the daily civil war. In the end, the shortcomings are obvious, but I really enjoyed watching it, so I am willing to give it five stars, hoping it will be better.

Rare, 99% rare, Let the children solve the adults' problems, and the old man's decision will let the young people die. A very classic world view of Japanese film and television from the last century, a very classic male protagonist This is not a cool article, but if you are the audience in this regard, then this is a cool article for you.

It's really well written, with Japanese manga style and A-level style, apocalyptic style and witch. If you insist on writing it, it will be a very successful manga adaptation if you can use the novel to change the manga. It's not that this chapter is not written a lot, it can be read in about two hours on average. If I think it would be a bit difficult to write or release it in China, as a lot of things would have to be deleted. If it were to be published abroad, it should be quite successful, but the power of capital is also quite strong. If you like the above style, you can come and watch it. It is still worth recommending. As a long time reader.

The subject matter is novel, but there is too little interaction with the witch. Can there be more love plots that make people feel warm? I am a cat, and I like to watch this kind of thing (ﾉ∇︎)

Medium large cup The advantages are clear, the combat writing is online, the plot logic is clear, and the subject matter is eye-catching. The shortcomings are currently mainly reflected in the atmosphere, as well as emotions and character modalities. An obvious example is the latest storm coming chapter. There is no sense of urgency of war. It is like a small-scale attack by a small wave of troops. It can even be said that there is no sense of oppression at all. The reason may be that the length arrangement does not take this into account, but the effect is indeed unsatisfactory. I can't tell you too many advantages, but I can clearly point out the shortcomings. On the contrary, it also shows that this work is indeed excellent in other aspects. I am looking forward to the follow-up chapters. Come on.

The author has an idea, and I feel that it has been borrowed from Gundam, A/Z, etc. If it can be written seriously and the ending is a happy ending, it will be a masterpiece. And since it is written like this, there must be multiple girls [laughing evilly], and no girls are allowed. It looks good [crying], the author shouldn't write it so harshly, okay [crying], my heart aches, it hurts so much that I don't want to read it.

It feels like a work that combines the national team, muv, and 86. The overall reading is pretty good. I look forward to updates.

It has a strong flavor of a drama, so there are quite a lot of plots within the drama. There are some toxic points throughout the text, but overall it's tolerable. The lack of baffling systems is a plus. The whole book is not brainless, but it is hard to say that it is brainy. It is in a superposition state, so don't delve too deeply into it.

Leaving aside the male protagonist [laughs], the author's writing skills are still very strong. He uses fragmented narrative techniques and fragmented information to piece together a complete world view. The events and plots are also tightly arranged, and the climax comes one after another. It is similar to a spiritual cage. Leaving aside the male protagonist, the design images of the supporting characters are also quite full. Only this Japanese male protagonist abandons everything when he sees a girl. The fact that Wu brain is for your own good is poisonous, but it is acceptable. After all, I don't miss Japanese comics. , I can only say that the author's writing is awesome and he only arranged such a male protagonist [face covering]

There are few novels on Tomato that I can read every day. Although the writing style is still a little flawed, the author's conceived plot is so in line with my taste. Various elements are blended together. I haven't read such a good novel in a long time. I hope the author will keep writing this book.