Gundam SEED: The Rise of a Warlord

How can I put it this way? I quite like Gundam fanfics, but the writing style is a bit verbose, there are too many metaphors and other rhetorical techniques, and there are also a lot of psychological descriptions. I don't know if you can understand what I mean. It feels like you can write a paragraph with the content of one sentence.

After reading Chapter 49 in one breath, I really thought, why did I give Zaku I at the beginning? In fact, Zida is good, and then I can improve it through the new human technicians, and then skip the two series of Zaku Tigers that are used to debut in the second season, so that the follow-up ZAFT The appearance of your own Zaku Warriors and Fire Tigers will not be too sudden. You can play Aoz's set and use the RF series to hide Zaku Tigers, which will be more dramatic. Then you can draw various strongmen and warriors from the Jilian Ambition game, as well as 80 It is a good idea to form your own army with Jingbaofan and the beautiful Warrior J-type, and grab ZAFT machines. Then, the first place where you can get the machine replenishment, several Heretics in Heliopolis should be moved away as soon as possible, and steal G's equipment by the way. In this way, in the early stage, you will have both mecha and G weapon information, and then when facing a large number of opponents, you can directly switch to Zeon's traditional art MA Varvaro's all-round model, and there will be no pressure at all when facing small-scale ZAFT or combined medium-sized fleets in the universe. But it looks pretty comfortable, please update.

I had been following it for a while, but then the author stopped updating it and stopped paying attention to it. In the past few days, I accidentally discovered that it had been updated again. The writing style has improved a lot compared to before, and the plot is more reasonable and coherent. You can feel that the author has carefully considered and polished it when writing. From the protagonist to every character in the book, each one has its own characteristics, especially the chef who accidentally trampled the instructor to death while using MS, which is very impressive.

The writing is good, and the plot is not limited to the original work. In addition, Greedy has good reviews, and the Lux clone has good reviews. Nigel can clone a sissy, and Aslan and Kira can also have one. In the future, Lux and Vivian will be together. This is no better than the original Mia.

It looks good and I hope it will continue to be updated. I would like the protagonist to have more Zeon ships and the Zaku Demon Warrior MA and so on.

The plot is well written. It is not the kind that follows the original work. It is its own independent story. The actions of the protagonist will also affect the actions of the original characters. It is not the kind that no matter how the protagonist dances, the plot remains unchanged. Come on 👍👍👍

Didn't the anchor sign a contract? I finished reading last time and was wondering about it. I was reading it in ZanZan and I forgot to add it to the bookshelf and couldn't find it. After a lot of effort, I finally found it. It's not easy 🤦

The disadvantage is that every time you call, you will be seen.

It's very good. I hope it won't end badly. There are too few Gundam stories.

Is there Lux among the heroines?