Gundam SEED: A Life Restarted

It's okay, but the inner monologue of the protagonist is very strange. As the consciousness formed by the time traveler and the original body, it is too fragile in many scenes. The most typical one is that the protagonist starts again after Kruse finished speaking. I feel that as the strongest adjuster and the God's perspective brought by the time traveler, it is impossible to be affected casually. The protagonist sometimes looks like a time traveler and sometimes looks like Kira himself. His inner feelings are sometimes very mature and sometimes very fragile. This is a problem.

The author is reborn as a fan novel. Please note that if the plot is too much the same as the original work, the dark room will be closed. It is best to create a new plot 👍👍👍

Let me state in advance that I am giving five stars because I am personally interested in the follow-up and I hope it will not be broken off so easily. From my personal point of view, the problem with this book is still very obvious: the protagonist does not feel like Kira has traveled through time, but rather like Kira has the memory of a time traveler. The transformation before and after the time travel is a bit abrupt. I hope the author can explain it well. In addition, the world-correcting power of some plots is still too strong, especially in the early stage. However, some plots that are far from the original are still very interesting, such as chickens raising birds in advance. Also, the pace is a bit slow in some places. By the way, I would like to make a suggestion, don't be limited by the original work in terms of airframes. The sword-mounted strike modification like the bird in this book is a bit good. Although it can be said that it was modified according to fate, it is not at least the endurance-enhanced version of the perfect strike. However, it feels a bit strange to directly put the name Ascension Freedom on the transforming machine that the protagonist of this article had in the first part. I personally think that there is no need to give that name to that machine, and there is no need to design it to look similar to Freedom, and it has indeed caused some misunderstandings in the book. In addition, Mu's Mebius backpack is also quite interesting. When writing fan fiction, you should be bolder and freer if possible. For example, if Kira doesn't allow freedom, he can just create an original new Gundam.

Come on, it's okay, but one chapter feels a bit short, and then what does Lux say? Will there be any emotional lines?

Very nice 👍, I watched it in one sitting No poisonous points and have own ideas

The author writes well 👍It's so beautiful! I hope you can keep writing until the end!

How did you get here? Why don't you keep writing

The writing is good, but one chapter is a bit short, and it's already over 100 chapters and there's still no heroine?

There are no other problems except for the sudden change in the protagonist's personality. Although Kira was originally confused about the war, the protagonist knows what he wants to do more clearly.

Is a potential new book