Cuddle Time: The Aloof Campus Belle Can't Be This Clingy

In fact, I originally wanted to leave some suspense to make people curious about the direction of the relationship and various factors in its development, but everyone reads books in different ways, and there is no way to help it. So for those who want a clear emotional direction, or are confused, I left a comment on the first chapter, you can go and read it. I really can't stand it anymore. I really can't satisfy everyone, and it's not my obligation. Just like my signature, writing novels is my hobby because I like to write and it's sharing. I don't even live on this stuff. It's like a person telling a story on the roadside. If you don't like the story, you can leave quickly, or even spit before leaving, but at least you can't say "I don't like this story, you should do it according to my ideas!" Right? Indeed, I am just like you. When I read novels, I will also have plots that I don't like and will be dissatisfied with. But I will not ask the author why he didn't write it this way. Instead, I will start to write what I want myself. All in all, everyone comes online to be the emperor. I can only work hard to continue to improve myself. Criticism is a precious resource for me to improve. However, I hope everyone can hold back their anger when criticizing. I also have a bad temper. In the end, it is very likely that we will become angry and shout at each other. Finally, I would like to emphasize that this comment is not directed at anyone, but because I have already understood the shortcomings of this book. This is the first pure romance novel I have written. There are indeed some misjudgments about the plot and enjoyable points. In order to avoid the displeasure of people who read it in the future, I hereby remind you.

After watching it for a long time, I finally understood it. The character of the senior sister can be compared to Mei Yi, who has a human-machine flavor [face covering] [OK]

Um. As an old bookworm. Make a post-view evaluation. The overall plot is very good. The relationship between the two people can be felt to be slowly warming up. The writing is just not sophisticated enough. Sometimes with the addition of narration and others. It will make people confused for a moment who said this. I personally suggest that the dialogue between the two heroines can be left without prompts. Do other characters have dialogue or add a little narration. This is easier to understand. The author is reviewing the reading. Throw away the framework within your brain. Read it with the feeling of an ordinary reader. You should know where to change it. Um. I'll do a second review when it's finished!

It's beautiful, every character is unique! ! And every time Li Xianyu speaks, his words are shocking and dumbfounded. It looks good, but is the other protagonist the senior or Ani?

It's nice and sweet, but I feel like the author has a strong sense of privacy.

I think it would be better to replace the heroine with Xia. She has a certain amount of affection for her childhood sweetheart.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [love] [admiration] [like]

Japanese, it feels like a romantic drama, the heroine is very hot, the second chapter is about to come out, what kind of Japanese hot-blooded heroine is there [please taste it carefully], everyone come and watch it, it is very good [like]

There is a kind of yandere beauty. I don't know why.

It looks good, but no one cares about it [facepalm] This makes me a little afraid that the author will stop updating [facepalm]