Reality Game: Creating a Mythos, Starting with Kafka

4 And a half for the book (the quality of tomatoes shall prevail) and half for the author's sentiments (Come on Sister Nan) Book review: Advantages: The story is complete, not fragmented, the characters are clear, there is brain, the story is deep, full of emotions, a lot of foreshadowing, a great world view, each character has a distinct thought, the characterization is complete, the spirit conveyed in the article is clear (feels like it is a bit attached to the Chinese spirit?), And the description is delicate Disadvantages: The foreshadowing in the early stage, the introduction of the characters, and the plot advancement are too slow. It is very tiring to watch in the era when cool writing is popular. In the later stage, it keeps recycling foreshadowing, reversal, and explosion. Many details are a bit vague, and it feels a bit rushed. There is no buffer point for emotions, or if the plot is forced, there can be no buffer point. The middle is constantly added to complete the character stories, which makes the narrative a bit chaotic and the rhythm is too fast. To the author: Sister Nan's books have always been recognized. Outside of the starting point, it is rare to see fan fiction that is descriptive, in-depth, thoughtful, creative, and close to the original characters without being OOC. However, I feel that Sister Nan (the two books currently written by Tomato) are more sad in writing. The protagonist always has to be depressed and then grow up. The pace is slow in the early stage, and suddenly explosive in the middle and late stages, and the emotions are too tight. Secondly, in the middle and later stages, the protagonist grows up, and other characters have to complete it, and the foreshadowing needs to be recycled and reversed... The whole text feels like a tower. It is not an easy task to control the full text. How to lengthen the sense of narrative without making certain paragraphs bloated or empty, and how to arrange and complete the character creation, I hope you will think carefully.

It's so pretty. I didn't expect tomatoes to have such fine bran.

Why is there no one reading such a beautiful book? Especially to my taste. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

It's rare to see such a good integration of game characters and its own world view. The characters are not OOC, and the main plot is a bit too over-the-top, but it is classic and passionate enough and worth watching. The last time I saw a similar Miyou fusion worldview was "Heterogeneous World Rhapsody", which was also well written, but it's a pity that the author is a eunuch. Hope this can end well.

Come on, come on, I like it very much

It's very interesting. Please keep reading. This book will be rated 9 points. From the perspective of characterization, it really feels like the character Beng Tie has come into reality. At least Kafka's character is well portrayed.

Of all the books I've read, this one is pretty good. I guarantee it will get an 8 out of 10. If I'm lucky, it will get up to 9 out of 10, but it's just not popular yet.

The writing is relatively good, but the protagonist's role is really a bit small, his ability awakening is a bit late, and his mastery level is a bit low. Will there be only one role in the future or will there be more roles?

It was a bit difficult at the beginning but got better later.

He's very good with knives, and the plot is quite well written.