Honkai: Star Rail: Dreaming of the Starry River

It's well-written, logically sound, and doesn't deviate too much from the plot. However, the slow pacing and gradual progression might have resulted in fewer readers. Hmm... It should improve once the word count increases. Congratulations in advance to the author on their data taking off! Seeing the 99+ red dot almost made me think I was being cyberbullied, but after clicking in, I found the author's comment section was bustling with activity, and a bunch of people were having a good time.

1. The most important aspect of fanfiction is avoiding out-of-character (OOC) moments, and this was achieved. 2. The writing is delicate, the structure is clear, and the descriptions are detailed, a level of quality rarely seen in Star Iron fanfiction. 3. Not confined to the main storyline, but also has a thorough understanding of the worldview.

The plot is engaging, avoiding traditional reincarnation and time-travel tropes, which adds a unique element to the story. The protagonist is unaware of the characters' personalities and statuses, nor does he know what his friends in the underground will achieve in the future. There's no protagonist starting out as incredibly powerful, easily defeating everything. Among the Honkai Impact 3rd fanfictions I've read, this is one of the best, but there are too few of them.

(If you don't want to read that, you can skip to the summary at the end.) This book is the best Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction I've ever seen. Compared to Bai Luo from the neighboring game, Jiang Jiang from Azur Lane, and Fu Ling from Honkai Impact 3rd, it's outstanding among fanfictions. The characters in this book are very strong, vivid, and captivating. The author has a bright future.

A decent Honkai Impact 3rd fanfic. There's no overpowered protagonist who throws himself at you from the start; the male lead's character is well-developed and feels very realistic. "Though in darkness, his heart yearns for the light." I've collected over 90 images, and I finished them in no time. Now, when I'm bored, I'll play a few rounds of Cocolia.

Great, the character designs are all faithful to the original, and there's nothing to criticize. It's just that the game has only been out for a short time, and I wonder how the author plans to write it. Will they create their own storyline to connect with the main plot, or will they just wait for the main plot to start? I initially thought it would flop due to low production value, but it didn't; the ending was truly amazing.

Not many knives, but so satisfying! So satisfying! Author! Give us more! Is this your skill?! Family, friendship, painful separations, ah! What a beautiful story! Long-buried emotions await their unlocker, who can only observe from the shadows!! How! How! So full of fun! Praise aha!

The author's writing is truly excellent, and the grasp of the characters' personalities is spot-on, without ruining their original character traits. The story is also very well-designed, possessing a certain... In short, I hope the author keeps up the good work and continues to update. This book is finally no longer restricted in its reach! Searching for keywords now shows up! Woohoo! 😢😢😆😆

Your writing is really good, I really like it, keep it up! (๑>ڡ<)☆

Wow, this is the best railway fanfiction I've seen so far!