In Character: Why Are You Crying? This Ending Is Great!

In the first world, you only need settings, and you can't say that there are no nerfs. I'm afraid it's a big difference if Fufu doesn't have Sanxiao. At least from the first world, it can be seen that the author has not got rid of the shadow of suppressing the protagonist's combat power. Fufu is definitely not that weak, but since you are an infinite stream, I won't criticize you. I hope you won't use settings in the future (there is really no need to forcibly weaken it in order to promote the plot, although it is better to weaken it from the beginning than to suddenly weaken it after the plot). You should have everything. Also, I feel that the probability of this book being unfinished may be over 90% (this is speculation: the author does not want to keep the book, and it can be seen that the author will not abandon the book until it has certain results, but the type of this book determines that it will be comfortable to read it in one world, so the proportion of readers of the book will only be higher than that of regular books, so the results will not be good before a story is finished. If the results are not good, the author does not want to update, and now it is slower, and the more books are completed, the more books will be finished, and it will end up unfinished). Therefore, the author still failed to break the underlying logic of Tomato (I thought there would be a book that broke through the underlying logic). It is a pity that it cannot be regarded as a good book, but it can still be read if there is a shortage of books. The level of this book is about 70%. If it really does not weaken at all, it should be 85%. I speculate that if the author does not generate electricity for love, this book will not survive 500,000 words, and maybe 300,000 words is enough, just for results. (The above are all personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like it) Finally, come on, author, writing a book is not easy.

Four stars for subject matter and creativity. Although I have read the first 6 chapters, I still have to say that many authors cannot escape the underlying logic of Tomato. The author has emphasized many times that the complete vest is a complete vest. The combat power is not much different from that of your fourth-level Funina, and both of them have combat power and so-called authority, so they are essentially the same in this book.) It gave me the feeling that you want to give a complete vest, but you don't want to give a strong character, you want to give the protagonist confidence, but you don't want the protagonist to go smoothly. This leads to you being uncertain and wandering, which makes me feel awkward when reading the book, and the label of complete vest is very likely to become a boomerang and hit me. (Just a guess, just a personal comment, don't comment if you don't like it)

It's good to watch, but what follows will be about the protagonist's tendency to ignite Destiny's Child? Wouldn't that be too one-dimensional? When this story just started, you already guessed the ending? When the strongest villain in the world shows up, you can guess the result, but there is only one reason missing. I personally think that this will always require a higher level of cultural knowledge on the part of the author (a colorful, wandering story, but a world text is wired, and it is unlikely to have too much emotional rendering) Otherwise, a story that has already guessed the ending will not be able to bring tears to readers and arouse their emotions. So has the author ever thought that the following story will change the status quo? (Of course it's only the second world, it's too early to say this) I will continue to wait and see, author, come on [flying kisses]

The author's writing is not very good. To be honest, the idea is very novel and the genre is also very good. The author devotes most of his writing to writing about daily life. As a person who originally did not want to write books, I want to write books. It is recommended that the author write this kind of story and speed up the plot. Cut out some small daily life and unnecessary daily life. In this fast-paced era, it is not suitable for writing like this. In addition to practicing writing and detail description, shaping The characters are not created to a high level of life. The plot should be reasonable and improved. I can't find the logic of this novel after reading this article. The author needs to improve it. The author can also use the form of interweaving reality and memories to write about daily life. Overall, this novel is still readable, and the author's ideas are very novel, and he really wrote it with heart. Support the author [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Let's predict that Walnut Roller, Walnut, will be related to Walnut Suo's first-blood ability. When faced with a fatal calamity, Walnut could not be killed no matter how hard she was hit, and her attack power was getting higher and higher. Finally, she took the Child of Destiny to escape a certain distance, then gave her a drip feed of chicken soup, said goodbye and ascended to heaven on the spot [laughing]

@ The main character is a male, a female in a waistcoat, and finally a group of female protagonists come to visit. Doesn't it mean that the male protagonist's harem story also wants the Lily Party to come in and kill him?

I can't give five stars to my own book too much, right? [Laughing evilly] This is not a mindless novel. If you want to see the protagonist wearing a vest and killing everyone... Be careful! Mainly based on the quality and character of the vest, Wei Dao! The plot of Infinite Streaming advances quickly, basically one world with dozens of chapters! Such as the world of still water, the world of Tianshi, the realm of holy glass (fall)... In short, this is the story: the protagonist enters various dark if lines to save the children of destiny in each world in order to delay the erosion of the world by the abyss.

Very beautiful, a rare book. But the question is, when will Fufu's vest be able to win the Easter match! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I really want to see Fufu vest win the resurrection match...

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! (◦˙▽˙◦) I like it, I like it very much! ! ! ! ! ! ! I hope there will be more updates (*σ´∀`)σ! ! ! ! ! ! ＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //／／

At present, there are two female characters: Fufu and Hutao. A male character: Zhongli, the story is not over yet. Fu Fu's essay has more than 40 chapters at most, and Hu Tao's has more than 20 chapters. To be honest, when it came to Zhongli. I thought I entered Teyvat at the wrong place ̋(๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑). I found out later that this was the case. I hope the author can listen to my opinions and write a little bit and delete a little bit by himself. Currently in a state of abandonment QAQ