Simulation: After I Became a Blaze, My Childhood Sweetheart Regretted It for Life

It is a very good simulation article. Although the overall context is relatively routine, the setting is novel and not greasy. This may be due to the novice author. In the early stage, there were some problems with inaccurate wording and some incorrect sentences that did not affect the overall reading experience. I believe that as the author grows, it will get better and better, and the future is promising. As long as you keep improving your writing skills, keep the plot from falling apart, and keep updating for a short period of time, this book can be given an overall score of 8.5 Or above. I don't know why the score I saw is only about seven points. I don't read many new books. I don't know if Tomato's new books start from a low score. If not, I suggest that the author check whether he has been maliciously given bad reviews. Finally, I wish the author's new book will get better and better and never get stuck. I also wish the author and all readers who also like online articles a Happy New Year in 2025!

To be honest, the content is quite rich and gives people a very good impression. It is very beautiful, but the poor little ginseng is still too short. I found it at about two o'clock yesterday afternoon and finished it at about four o'clock. But today is the Laba Festival, so I will give it five stars. Happy Laba Festival with the little ginseng [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good, but the subject of multiple female protagonists is not easy to grasp. This type of simulation type with multiple female protagonists is generally difficult to write about emotions, because in the simulation world, the male protagonist is usually single-minded, but in the real world, multiple female protagonists will make the protagonist look like a scumbag. This kind of plot is so uncomfortable. Generally, in articles about a harem, the male protagonist is a passionate person, so the harem is understandable. I've read a lot of movies with this theme, but the first two or three stories were good, but there were too many female protagonists in the end, which caused the ratings to drop. I'm curious how the author will deal with this contradiction. Don't write a simulation with a single female protagonist, but a reality with multiple female protagonists. This kind of book will not attract those who like to read single female protagonists, nor will it attract those who like to read harems. It will only attract those who like to read Shura Field, but I really feel that there are not many such people. [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] Let me give you some suggestions. 1. During the simulation, you can downplay some of the relationships. I think the second female protagonist is okay. In the simulated world, there is more of a teacher-student relationship. If the male protagonist chooses the first female protagonist, she will only bless her. 2. Except for the first heroine, other heroines should not be too strong in character. The harem needs to be suppressed by the main palace. I think Lin Ran is good😌. The strength of the subsequent heroines should not exceed Lin Ran. Come on finally👏

Interesting dialogue, deep plot, concise short story, it is an excellent work. You can see the author's careful polishing, and the comment area is also very harmonious. It also witnessed the author's change from deputy to full-time writer. Don't be too anxious and follow your own path. It is excellent. I highly recommend book friends to read this excellent work~

Very good simulator article, looking forward to Shura Field😋👍🏻 Will Wei's sister be killed in the end? Then the sister disappeared, Wei turned into a cyber madman and then killed the protagonist? 🤔 That kind of thing is awesome😭

Support it, the plot is reasonable so far and it doesn't look like it will be a drama. The emotional line is also written very well. If it continues to be at this level in the future, it will definitely be above 9 points, and the subject matter is not a traditional fantasy cultivation simulation, it is still worth reading.

Great article. I have been looking for a multi-planet story novel like Yinhu. This novel uses a simulator and uses the protagonist as a link to connect various planets and civilizations. Although the daily life after the simulator does not describe much about the characteristics of the planet, it is still an experience in the simulated life. The shortcoming is that it is too short, not enough to read, and I found that the author also has thoughts about eunuchs. The simulation can also use universes and timelines to connect the world. The heroines of each simulation are very plump. Except for the lack of daily life after the simulation, everything else is perfect.

It's pretty good to watch. One of the better points is pure love. There isn't a woman in every simulation, bringing him unnecessary emotional trouble. Bonus points. The description is okay. Anyway, it doesn't look laggy.

The plot setting of this novel is very good, and the simulation process is not too much, so one plot will not be too overwhelming. The first world was too hot and there were some jokes in it, so it wasn't boring. The second world is almost boring, but it's also very good, without wasting too much writing. The plot and plot settings of the third world are very good, and the plot is quite large. It can even be read as a stand-alone book. The author believes that this book has great potential, so don't give up. Yours is the only simulation I've ever read. Other simulations are too boring. Just keep at it, you can slowly improve it, but don't give up or speed up the process regardless of quality. As long as it continues steadily, there is still great potential.

Yes, the author of this novel is more willing to listen to advice, and it is obvious that the writing is getting better and better in the future. The choices and worlds of each simulation are also quite interesting. You can take a look. If you like this type of novel, you will not be disappointed.