Life Simulator: Drowned in a Vocational School Bathroom from the Start

↖(^ω^)↗Here Comes Shennong 😄[OK] The plot is very good and the simulation is well omitted. Except for the occasional little weirdness (which can be ignored compared with other books), the real-life scenes are very exciting (really) and not exciting. But it's basically nothing obtrusive) It's funny, it's sad, it's fun, it's satisfying 😄 Emperor Shu. If I have to say a flaw, it might be that the protagonist's perspective and emotional changes are sometimes weird 🤔 (for example, when his hamstring is pulled, he's very indifferent and can even joke, but then he says he hates it), but not much. Also, the author is not very rigorous, which leads to small loopholes or ambiguities (｡ì _ í｡) [Summary]: It's good to read 😄 [OK] It's a good simulation article It's exciting and the yandere is well represented (the yandere is still a bit worse than the masterpiece, but it's not bad). It's sad but not depressing (you can watch it even if you don't like knives). It has some fun parts. The disadvantage is that sometimes the setting is very vague and imprecise, and the protagonist's occasional state and mood changes are unnatural. Finally! 💕 This is a small masterpiece *^o^* recommended to read! Still excellent 😄 [OK] but no flow. The author has let himself go (it has improved recently). There are good and bad things. The good thing is that the content expressed by the author after letting himself go is more profound (although it is a little childish, haha♪(´ε`)) and the imagination is bigger (this idea is really big and exciting [hold it]), especially the girl. The protagonist is also made more three-dimensional, more fleshed out and more enjoyable. The disadvantage is that there are more loopholes. For a certain feeling and moment The plot became a little illogical 🤔 It was a bit deliberate and I forgot to advance the main plot (I'm being serious. It's not that exaggerated, but it's true. It's still very interesting to write. Although it's a yandere simulation novel, it also tells a lot of truth. That's why I evaluated it so seriously 😄 [OK] This one is much better than most simulation novels. From a yandere point of view, it's not a good review, but it's not bad) 🤔 But overall it's still excellent. It's still recommended to read. The three-star rating is exempt from sealing. After all, it's the emperor's uncle [laughing] Edit: The rating is too low. Raise it high 😄[OK] *Supplement*: It's a good book but the traffic is bleak and scumbag. Please think about it before reading [Sending my heart]

It's a pretty good book. It's about deformed love, twisted affection, the ignorant love from parents and the darkness. Especially the part about quitting the Internet felt very real to me. These three stories are very interesting. Let's see how the author writes next. If it looks good, the last star will help you make up for it😊

The prototype of the male protagonist in the second world is the child prodigy Zhang Xinyang, a ten-year-old college student, a thirteen-year-old master, and a sixteen-year-old doctor. Such a child prodigy is still dragged down by his original family. His parents are even figures in the Kochi system. The male protagonist was born in a family that favors sons over daughters. In the second world, I just want to write about the evil in the corners, Yuzhang Academy, and Baoyan Pill, and then crush them one by one. I see, I come, I conquer.

It's a very novel book. It's different from traditional simulation essays. It's beautiful and the author is very brave in writing. Please update it more 👍👍👍

The technology chapter is very well written. Except for the unimportant main plot, the emotions in this article are more delicate than any other books of this type I have read. It feels a bit bland but grand. The writing is also very good, you just have to be patient and read it, thank you so much😃

Well, how can I put it this way? I focused on what the author said and put the most effort into writing the urban chapter. Generally speaking, it has its own ideas. The urban chapter is a chapter that stitches together many things. The author wants to express a lot of things, but at the beginning I felt that they could be divided into different chapters and expressed in different ways. For example, at the beginning of the urban chapter, what the so-called male protagonist experienced on his way to school, whether it was school, or the initial design of AI, etc. In terms of events, in the part of the Internet addiction school, I think there are many things that I want to express. The metaphors are a bit sensitive. Internet Addiction School, this part has more words and inks, but I personally think that this small part of the story has some unreasonable parts. I am engaged in this field, and from my perspective, there are big loopholes. The influence of social events, including the follow-up processing, is more serious now, but in order to serve the plot, I understand it. In the later part of the AI startup, when I moved to the end of the world and science fiction, the transition was still a bit abrupt, but I think this can be made up for in the future. It is a matter of experience. I am very optimistic about the author's learning ability. Finally, there is the shaping of the science fiction character Ashe. Well... The character that the author spent the most effort to create, I think there are some creative points and the three-dimensionality of the character. Even if there are flaws, for example, Ashe's transformation in the early part of the chapter can actually be guided by more writing, but the author used his writing more in the middle and later stages to describe the process of an AI becoming a human. This process is indeed well written. The so-called birth of a girl in the end echoes the foreshadowing laid in the previous article. It does have the atmosphere of science fiction and is stitched together a lot, but after all, it also has its own ideas. I very much support the author to continue to study slowly. This book may have lost the grade, but I hope that the experience of this book will be useful to you in the future. I spent a small part of my time writing my review of a small part of your work. I hope it will be useful for your writing. You can try to write more short stories. I am very optimistic about you. I'm so sleepy. Some of the words I wrote don't make sense. Come on. Written at 2.42 On December 26

The old background, the old story, the old plot, and the old system. But it is also one of the few good things in Shuangwen. All I can say is it's pretty good. Come on

It's a very nice book. I haven't read such delicious emotional writing in a long time. The writing style is interesting and fun. Of course, the narrative aspect is also great. However, I only read it for a year and why did I die from reading it? 😢

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