Western Fantasy: Reincarnated as a Vampire Lord

After reading it for about half an hour, I would like to briefly talk about some minor problems with this book. First of all, the author's writing style is a bit immature and makes it a bit awkward to read in some places. This is an unavoidable shortcoming for novices. The author can try to read other authors' books to learn their writing style. Then there's the rhythm. The author can slow down the pace a bit and not be too tight. Too tight a pace will make some places look a bit messy. This needs improvement. Finally, these comments only apply to my first half hour of reading and do not represent the author's subsequent adjustments. If there is any offense, just pretend I didn't say anything. Thank you. [Praise]

Although the writing is like that of an AI, the plot is quite humorous and the imagination is great.

Why is there no one? I think it's pretty good. Come on, author [send heartfelt wishes]

Please encourage me. Although the writing is a bit poor, at least it's not too poisonous and it's still readable. Looking back, I understand why not many people watched it. The subject matter is okay, but the character of the protagonist is too cottony.

The translation is a bit heavy, but I like it [laughs evilly]

It's a pity that Avril Lavigne is gone. I originally thought that the heroine's body was transformed after being embraced for the first time, but it turned out that she directly inherited Avril Lavigne's body.

Unexpectedly, no one

It's beautiful, but there are so few people there

It ended so suddenly

It's still the same sentence. That year I clicked with both hands and didn't know how to comment.