Crossing the Line: My Deranged Disciple Has Fallen to the Dark Side Again

It looks like a group portrait, but there are only 3 groups of characters. A yandere and crazy group: the representative character, the male protagonist, (suspected to be the heroine's brother Dijun, suspected to be the heroine's former love Ji Yunqing) A calm and funny group: Representative characters, heroines, (donkey, fox, Li Quzhuo, Master also has some, fox peripherals, mermaid beauty) A serious group of pure villains: representative, leader [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] The map changes too quickly, and the perspective changes back and forth. The characters are very similar, and they all have a common point of being heartless. I personally like this kind of character, but it's given to too many people. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] You can watch it, I feel like everyone has a story line, but now it has been buried, causing the main line to be cut off. I like the heroine, she is cute and likes to feed the donkey to eat candied haws, she is heartless. (Above)

I hope the author can finish it well, woo woo woo woo, the heroine is focused on pushing out, and the male protagonist is focused on drilling in, it's a bit like she ran away from him and chased him, hehe, it's very interesting, the author must stick to it. (I like to read half of the male protagonist's self-defeat story without thinking, and the second half, hmm🌚🌚🌚) This five-star rating is for the first half, but I will give one star for the second half. The reading process was very uncomfortable, but now that it is over, it feels a bit unfinished🌚🌚🌚 , the emotional line between the heroine and the master is, uh, I don't understand it a bit, it's just the past between the heroine and the master. I originally thought that the master's darkening would involve the demon clan's big conspiracy, but I didn't say anything. I just turned from memory back to reality, including The article talks about where the master will go in this reincarnation... And the young male protagonist and the young male protagonist. It seems to say that the young man has been suppressed or something, so he has no part in the role. In the last few chapters, he is just a tool man and is brought out again. Oh... Ha, including the deputy CP's bunny and the heroine's best friend, there were a lot of scenes in the early stage, but in the later period, I remember it seemed like there were only a few sentences and they were gone... In the end of the relationship, they were still bedmates..., And there is also the heroine's BU who becomes smaller without a hair tie. G, uh, there are quite a lot of mysteries. I feel like the final battle is a bit of a joke, especially since the heroine at the end is actually the one who does the fast-traveling mission🌚🌚🌚. I feel like the author, uh, is unexpected, and I feel a little hurt for Zhongyong. , Just watched it and it was like dancing on my XP, but after that, I felt a deep sense of powerlessness, it's a pity for the master, I even thought at the time that it couldn't work, the male protagonist is actually the reincarnation of the master, my mother, that just pushed me down In the Sugar Bowl. I originally saw that the male and female protagonists finally had a real relationship. I thought they still had at least 40 chapters left to write. However, after finishing 4 chapters, it was a bit shocking to see the male protagonist take out his own heart and eat it. This extra episode is even more watery. Water🌚🌚🌚, well, actually, although we also want to see the author who updates 10 times a day, we don't want to see the super bad ending of Invincible Water. I even think that it would be good if the female protagonist died🌚🌚🌚But the male protagonist is really not worthy of her.

I've been looking for yandere novels lately, and this one really suits my taste [laughs crookedly]. It's also a master and apprentice, which is even better.

In fact, it's okay. The overall plot in the front is really connected very well, but it feels a bit messy in the back. Alas, some holes have not been filled in, which is really a pity, but I think it may also be due to the review. There will be some things missing, but overall it is good.

The ending was so rushed that I felt like there was still a lot left to write about. It felt like I had eaten candy but it was stuck in my throat. The ending turned into a quick time travel story which was really weird. I felt that the story of the heroine in heaven was omitted, as well as her past life with the Demon Lord. The early writing was super good, but I feel like the worldview only gave some foreshadowing. I would like to ask for the general content of the draft chapter. But the author can be considered as using love to generate electricity. I wish you a happy life.

It's a touching master-disciple romance, and the writing is also good. I don't know why the rating is low (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Amway Amway! ! ! Very beautiful!

Maybe it's because I haven't seen the world before, but this is the most beautiful type of sister-brother romance I've ever seen. The wording is very appropriate, high-level, and really beautiful. The details are absolutely not sloppy. Except for some of the endings that are a bit abbreviated, I can guess the general outline. It's annoying to write too much, but it's just right. I like it, I like it very much.

There are many pitfalls that have not been filled in: 1. The master of the heroine; 2. What happened to the emperor's sister? Is it just a small episode? 4. The heroine and the girl seem to have not solved the misunderstanding in the previous life until their death [crying]. I feel like they have a long way to go. The ending was too fast. [Crying] I didn't see enough.

It's super sexy, you must use it The writing in the front is very good, and the part about the real Haoxue Immortal in the middle is really amazing, but the ending is a bit rushed, and it feels like it ended suddenly (maybe it's because I watched the previous and later episodes in two parts, and I can't remember the previous plot?) There are a lot of holes left unfilled, the ones in Heaven and the follow-up of the fox's ascension are not explained, and it's not made clear that the male protagonist is Haoxue, and there is still a lot more to be written about Liulixin and returning to the devil world. Overall it's pretty good, I'm looking forward to the next book [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. I haven't found a good master-disciple article for a long time. The front is okay, but the back feels unfinished