Xu Damao: From the Start, I Cost Yi Zhonghai 600 Yuan

I have to say that the author's ideas are quite good, and he has his own most unique idea. But it also has its own shortcomings, that is, there is too much nonsense. I hope the author can streamline the number of words and broaden his ideas again, so that he can get a good novel. Otherwise, if the word count is kept like this, readers may be seriously lost. What readers want to see is a clear idea. Since your idea is so perfect, there is no need to reduce the word count to increase Zhang Shu. That is unnecessary. Come on, young authors hope to see you grow again. After all, it is not easy for newcomers to write books. Readers here also sincerely wish that the author can have his own growth and have his own world. Start writing well, come on, come on, come on, come on!

I have to say that the author's ideas are quite good, and he has his own most unique idea. But it also has its own shortcomings, that is, there is too much nonsense. I hope the author can streamline the number of words and broaden his ideas again, so that he can get a good novel. Otherwise, if the word count is kept like this, readers may be seriously lost. What readers want to see is a clear idea. Since your idea is so perfect, there is no need to reduce the word count to increase Zhang Shu. That is unnecessary. Come on, young authors hope to see you grow again. After all, it is not easy for newcomers to write books. Readers here also sincerely wish that the author can have his own growth and have his own world. Start writing well, come on, come on, come on, come on

This book is very well written. I have finished reading it. Although some modern vocabulary has been added, it is not bad. Overall, it is not bad. Keep writing.

Very well written. It's very beautiful, but don't go to Hong Kong. Because what we are looking at is the story of a courtyard house.

No matter what others say, I think it's okay, so I'll give it 5 stars. It's true that the score is low and it makes sense. Let's go.

Xu Damao, a coward who died tragically on a snowy night in his previous life, was reborn in 1958 with the Quantification System of People's Hearts. Directly turning on the anti-kill mode is too relaxing💢 Angrily criticizing Jia Zhang for harvesting negative emotional values ​​🤦

It's a very good book. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's better than the one about human beings. Come on.

Well written, keep it up.

The author has made great progress in his writing Dear readers, there are many shortcomings in this new book. Thank you for your corrections. I have read the comments and made modifications according to the problems. Thank you again for your support. I will accept your opinions humbly and write the content well. Thank you all readers. Thank you very much.

Hehe! There are three women!!