Siheyuan: Extorting 3,666 Yuan from Yi Zhonghai

For the time being, it is relatively normal in a courtyard novel about a group of monsters and monsters, and it looks very enjoyable, and it is also in line with the characters of the original plot (the kind that can be logically self-consistent and not demonized by creation). The only drawback is that the amount of money extorted is too large. It is okay to do it in private, but it is not done in public. . . You must know that the protagonist of this book has only one space. He has fighting ability, but not too much, and his wealth is not exposed. The author generally writes so well that this innocuous point is infinitely magnified. This is purely a personal opinion. If you have any objections, please read ten to twenty more Siheyuan novels before arguing. There are many good ones, but there are more weird ones. As long as I can read normal ones, I will give them at least four stars.

I have to say that the author's ideas are quite good, and he has his own most unique idea. But it also has its own shortcomings, that is, there is too much nonsense. I hope the author can streamline the number of words and broaden his ideas again, so that he can get a good novel. Otherwise, if the word count is kept like this, readers may be seriously lost. What readers want to see is a clear idea. Since your idea is so perfect, there is no need to reduce the word count to increase Zhang Shu. That is unnecessary. Come on, young authors hope to see you grow again. After all, it is not easy for newcomers to write books. Readers here also sincerely wish that the author can have his own growth and have his own world. Start writing well, come on

There are thousands of people, and the author cannot satisfy everyone. I hope you don't mind, and thank you for your support, no matter what others think. I feel that I am the best, go to my best self, go to my favorite readers, and go to our bright future.

The writing is good, but it lacks a little passion. At that time, antiques and gold were the cheapest, so you could buy more as a backup. There were also houses, even trashy houses, with large amounts of antique gold stored in their cellars. In this way, you can write a story and clear it up.

Although some places are cliched, there are also many shining points.

It's still refreshing to see this

It's okay for now. It looks pretty cool. It's okay at the beginning, but it's poisonous later on.

Watching the excitement makes me panic

Although the content is simple, it is still watchable. The language is witty and humorous, and there are constant jokes.

Except for the rushed ending, everything else was okay.