The Outcast: The Rusted Iron Arc Begins, and Slaying Enemies Makes Me Stronger

It's well written. It's an invincible novel. The plot and logic are relatively normal. The pace of the rest of the game is too slow, just like AI. Killing a little devil can drag on for dozens of chapters, which is like chewing wax. . .

After looking at the author's homepage, I was surprised. It could be written by the same person.

Very good, I like it. This kind of writing is best without a female protagonist👍🏻 It started out fine, but then it got weird.

Just because he is patriotic and loves to kill Japanese. Full marks

This book is definitely a good one among fans, and the author was born in 1967 [face covering], and is also the founder of a trading system. Two updates a day are all based on hobbies, so just read and cherish it. Maybe one day the author is in a bad mood and will stop.

Among the fan fiction I have read, this book can really be ranked among the best. It has its own opinions, knows exactly what it wants to do, and has a clear distinction between good and evil. And it doesn't overwhelm combat power. It's what it should be. It's a good book.

OK? I am writing to give some suggestions to the author. 1. Can the author take a look before uploading? The chapter name is a bit strange. 2. Can you focus on the anti-Japanese war? After all, the rust time is the biggest feature of your book. There are too many fights between one person in other books [Chigua]

It's slow. I feel that the plot is too slow. I came here to kill the Japanese in the early stage and be invincible in the later stage. Chapter 200 feels like I can write about Wu Gensheng leading 8 people to create the Eight Wonders. I can have a protagonist. Then in chapters 10 to 15, the protagonist starts to retreat. After all, he is 20 years old after he comes out. But It would be better to have a slap-in-the-face plot instead of blindly killing the devils. It would be better to have more one-person plots. However, it is already very good for the author to write this type of novel for the first time. The upgrading in the early stage and the later chapters are good, but the updates are too slow and people cannot see the later stages. Even if they want to skip chapters, there is no way. Finally, let us look forward to the rise of the author.

Although it is a refreshing article, it does not drag on, the pace is fast, and the author chooses the time period well. I'm afraid that when I get to the point where I'm actually doing the plot alone, I won't feel so free because I'll make mistakes because I'll be in contact with the protagonist group.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.