Aotu World: My Secret Identities Exist Only in Your Imaginations

The writing is not bad. It basically falls into the category of books that can attract people entirely by writing. The plot is unique and the interactions between the characters are very interesting, especially the chapters where Amber and Lei Shi swap bodies. The insertion point of the character timeline is something I have never seen before. Other convex articles are better. Either start directly from the Alto Contest, or insert it from the timeline of a single character and follow it through to the end. Occasionally, I encountered a few who gave me a lot of trouble. This book is the only one that is well written, and the horse text is also unique among Albo fans. This book is unique. However, there are too many original characters and some do not have special memory anchors. It is easy to misremember or not remember at all, such as the nun (forgive me for forgetting her name). The personal plot of the character should not be separated too much. When Byris appeared again, I even forgot his plot. In the end, I had to go back and replay it before I remembered it. The author can try to connect multiple characters together and write the plot together. The appearance time should also be strictly controlled. Try not to have a situation where the time span is too large and the readers will forget the content. There is no way. This is a common problem in Ma Jiawen. I rarely see people who grasp the rhythm well. It is also recommended to reduce the number of scenes in the main body and the system as much as possible. After all, there are only so many updates every day, and most of them are two characters who do not participate in the main plot. It is really a bit nonsense. Occasionally interspersed with some programs can still be effective.

Si Guoyi! The author writes so well! Each vest has a distinct personality, making people fall in love with them unconsciously while reading. Moreover, the characters are not OOC, and it is very enjoyable to read. There is no licking of the characters, and I don't feel aggrieved at all when facing some cunning people. The system is also very good. It is not as stupid or forced punishment as other system books. Rita also does not have a condescending attitude. Why does it appeal to me so much? It is simply a treasure story, so good!!! Madam, I will follow you forever~!!!

The overall look and feel is good, but the plot is very condensed and the system is more detailed. After reading it, I feel that the story unfolds too violently. It would be better to expand it a little more. There are really a lot of new characters appearing in a short period of time. Rating: A cup of concentrated drink with some water~

The plot is interesting and diverse, allowing me to see various endings. Everyone takes different steps and then come together again, and every idea is special. For example, swapping bodies with Lei Shi, The idiots on the planet, Abby and her brother, actually have a bone. It seemed like this was said in the article, and I wanted to laugh. And Aunt Palos, ah, one of the protagonist's vests, claws? Palos said you will be scared, which reminds me personally of the sickly laughter and the perverted eyes. And Xander was wrapped up, unable to speak or move. I watched the protagonist's clone apologize for a long time, and felt so helpless that he could not speak or move. And when the protagonist's avatar solves the curse for the knight, I really wish someone could draw that scene for me, because my imagination is not good, it's not good-looking enough, and I can't draw well either. I can only draw stick figures, six chicken wings, or chicken skeletons. Hello, the author, it's like this. The author's writing is really beautiful. I really want to read it again, and want to keep reading until I see the end. But, well, the author's coding speed may not be that fast, so I accumulate reading, but I am worried that I support the book and support the author. Because everyone is reading the author, not many people read it, and there is no motivation to continue writing, and then I stopped writing. I just want to say this here. The author writes very well, please keep it up! I really didn't mean to keep the book, I mainly read it one by one, which was really hard because I couldn't read the next chapter.

The writing style has a sense of high-end, and the ordering of the later paragraphs is a bit messy. It could be divided into more chapters, but I love reading it. This is the only innovative embossed article I have found. All the vests that appear in your book are very vivid and real, and there are also characters that I have imagined before, such as Lei Shi's relatives and so on. I love it. My book reviews are also in a messy order. Just make sure you understand them. Thank you author. Please update them every day.

It's very interesting to watch. It's different from the other humanities I've read before. The main reason is that the expansion of the worldview surprised me! You must know that the concave and convex world has very little depiction of the world background. It is obviously an interstellar world, but it does not give people enough impressions. Those planets look very mini, and they feel only as big as a few villages. Also, the protagonists of most concave and convex fanfics must make their way in front of the God of Creation, must have a relationship with the character, must experience misery, must participate in the concave and convex competition, and some will lose their memories and become angels. I was speechless, "Don't you have your own life?" In short, I think the only shortcoming of this book is that the personal style is too strong and cannot be liked by everyone. [Praise]

It's really a good fanfic. The author writes it very seriously. Basically, one chapter can only be 4,000 words. It's also the first time I've seen such a long fanfic. It's really awesome. Every character is very distinct. Anyway, I quite like it. There are no flaws. Hehehe, it's just good-looking! ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ (=^▽^=)Ｏ(≧▽≦)Ｏ ヾ(´∀｀．ヾ) ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I like Ma Jiawen very much. I saw the teacher's work by chance before, but because I thought the number of words was too small, I kept putting it in my favorites and gathering dust. I finally finished it in one go last week. I felt that it was really too short and not enjoyable enough. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ (Preparing for the second time - _-) This fic is super interesting. The teacher has a comprehensive understanding of the concave and convex worldview, and his control over the character's personality and behavior under different situations is also very good! Except for the big change in Papa's character in the article, which I still can't accept, I like everything else! (It's not that I don't want Papa to be happier, it's just that the image of Palos in the original plot was deeply rooted in my heart, and I haven't changed it for a while. Haha, my question) Whether it's the plot about the original characters or the plot about the vest, they are all well written! By the way, I also really like the silly siblings! Teacher, keep on creating! Very supportive! Like it very much! (Again, by the way, Byris is so cute ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo…

I personally love it, and I feel that the writing is really good, especially the description of some cruel aspects of the concave and convex world, such as the life of the miners in the Eliu District and Dengruel. The author is not just limited to the description of the main characters, but also well depicts the world. It also describes the lives of other people (such as the shopping malls of the Interstellar Consortium and the employees of temporary companies), as well as the outstanding characteristics of the successors of the princes of Lei Shi. When I saw the author describing his feelings and views on An from Li's perspective, I felt that he was worthy of being a royal family! Looking forward to the new chapter, the elements of the fourth natural disaster are also very interesting.

A little advice for new readers. This book does not start from the Concave and Convex Contest, she lays the groundwork from the beginning, and every character is not black and white. If you can't stand it, you can turn left and go out. Don't deliberately give negative reviews. I think the plot from the beginning is reasonable but also carries a sense of absurdity with technology that is not from this world (the world we live in), which is quite consistent with my stereotype of the concave and convex world. The personality of each character is very clear (but it is also clear that the author has a great preference) My favorite plot is the one where Luo Luo and Wei Jing plot against the Zitang family. It gave me the illusion of reading a plot about power [thinking] (not But the author... Can we average the description and gravity of each character...? Now I'm a little bit looking forward to Sister Sally's operation. It's nothing, mainly because I want to see someone show off... All in all, although the overall plot is different from any fanfic I have ever read (but it doesn't have to be the same...:), It is also because of this difference that it gives people a novel look and feel. Finally, I love you! The author is great 😘