Erosion of the Anomalies

(The following contains spoilers Great book! I have been searching on Tomato for a long time and almost all I have seen are those with no logical plot and low IQ. Although the rating is low, this one is really good-looking (Tomato really has no discernment). Here are the reasons why I like this book. First, character creation. The He Ye described by the author is real. She can be cool, embarrassed, or scared. She is like a real living person, without the flatness of most novel protagonists, and everything she does after encountering danger is calm, rational (?) But humane. For example, a lot of points are used to save Quan Miaoyin. She is not cold, nor is she the "Madonna" that many readers hate. She is really a girl with a very charming personality [love]. At the same time, this book is in line with my understanding of group portraits. I originally thought that the crazy female Quan Miaoyin had the highlight moment of holding a dagger with chopsticks, and the boss-like Turin who was like Yun Danfengqing would be very embarrassed and almost died when he entered Valerie's dream. Each character is a unique existence, and the supporting characters who are not the protagonist are not created just to promote the development of the plot. They are flesh and blood people. Secondly, the plot is unexpected and breaks the rules. When I saw Turin running in the rift of time and space for two years and forgetting two new teammates when he came out, when I saw Ke Yu building the "Cage Plan" for ten years, and the abyss Lewis and others were in was actually Ke Yu's body, I was so surprised that someone could write such words. The plot development is very exciting, not to mention the exquisite wording and vivid descriptions. The author's literary background is really profound. P. S. Why is this book rated so low? It is obviously much better than some books with scores above 9. Also, I was really sad when I saw Chapter 85. I will definitely follow Shanjiuzhuan Platform [crying]

After reading the prequel, I immediately went to read the sequel. It can be said that it is one of the few works that I have written in foreign countries that contains English and Chinese. The sequel recycled a lot of foreshadowing, and the author's excellent creative ability and writing skills can be seen from the meticulous logic and smooth plot connection. The protagonist's growth process does not have the brainless excitement of opening the Golden Finger, but the layers of hardships in escaping from death make her character more able to withstand the torture of a long plot. There is no big bking for the whole game, just an ordinary person who racks his brains and keeps his feet on the ground, and occasionally fights with some luck. The group portrait is not a fixed teammate mode. The protagonist will randomly act with new characters, but the appearance of these supporting characters is not a "tool" to promote the development of the plot. The story line of each supporting character is very clear, and everyone's feelings are so clear. Their behavior is not a bridge built for a certain purpose, but their character will do such a thing. I am grateful to the author for allowing me to glimpse into another world.

The teacher's writing style is very good, but I personally feel that there are some minor flaws in the plot. Although the first copy has 80 chapters, I still feel that some places are a bit rushed (?) I don't know how to describe it, hahahaha, but I usually imagine a map in my mind when reading a book. If it is infinite streaming, it will be like many small maps. Judging Whether a book is good or not depends on the coherence and completeness of the map. After reading the first copy, I felt that the coherence was slightly less. However, there is a prequel to this book that I have not read, so in terms of understanding the setting, it may have an impact on the coherence. But I really feel that this book is also an eye-catching novel on Tomato! Next, I will talk about some things that I personally think can be improved, but it is from the aspect of [female-friendliness]. Maybe not so many people care about it, but I think it is a very important scoring link for female-channeled novels. I saw that the introduction of the prequel also mentioned related issues, and the teacher has also improved it, so I boldly make some suggestions. I hope the author and teacher can adopt them as appropriate: 1. The male-female ratio is 50-50. Since it is a non-CP novel, I am looking forward to it. I hope that more excellent and powerful female partners will be added in the future. At present, in terms of descriptions of female and male supporting characters, I feel that there are more descriptions of Turin and Keyu Zhongjia (single copy), but in fact, changing Zhongjia, Keyu and others to women will not affect the plot. In other words, I hope the author can give priority to setting them as women when creating the characters. Either they want to see lesbians, or they want to see more diverse female portrayals. For example, the short story of Quan Shen is very good. I like this character very much. 2. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I think it's a bit unacceptable that this is mixed in with this. . . Although it doesn't state that there is CP, I really don't want to see BL elements in female videos Nvwu (wipe away tears), because generally speaking the most important thing about Nvwu is the shaping of the heroine. . . Secondly, whether they are creating a guide supporting character or a lesbian supporting character, in addition to their role in promoting the plot, they may have a little ambiguous relationship with the heroine. Of course, this depends on the author, but I just gave an example here (personally, I don't want to see any ambiguous contact, hahaha, I only want to see female mutual aid) , but if this supporting character is a gay man, then the role of this character is only to promote the plot (such as joining the protagonist group or being on the villain's side). In addition, his connection with the heroine can be said to be minimal, and his setting is meaningless (because unless the author wants to write for him, it is a completely replaceable setting). . . Because no matter what, the lowest demand of a female protagonist is to see the portrayal of the female protagonist, and the second is to see the female protagonist, not the male portrayal. If you want to watch this category, just go to the next few channels to watch it, but you can't even watch it. After talking for so long, I don't know what I am expressing. In short, it is not recommended to include BL elements in the female protagonist or even the BG. I haven't thought of anything else yet. I wish the author and teacher's popularity will increase!

This book is really super good. Don't miss it if you pass by. I will write a note at the beginning to recommend everyone to read it. I read this book after reading the first part overnight. It continues the style of the first part. It is recommended to read this book after reading the prequel part. The connection will be smoother. The first copy has about 80 chapters, and the pace feels a bit slow. Mainly because I felt a little sleepy while watching it, but the plot is very exciting and I want to go to sleep after reading it. Then the author said that this copy will end in about 80 chapters and I suddenly woke up (bushi). The author's writing style is really good, and it seems to be a very comfortable writing style. And this kind of writing feels like a balance between all the forces. The setting of the force value of each character is quite mind-boggling, haha. The author has a good grasp of it, and the author has been looking at and correcting the problems such as "words that humiliate women" that someone mentioned in the first part. And I really like this kind of plot setting where everyone has highlights, shortcomings and advantages. I feel that as soon as some characters appear, people are curious about the source of their abilities, past experiences and so on, and the sense of story is very strong. Currently, I am chasing the female protagonist to practice body training. I am looking forward to the heroine becoming stronger. Watching the heroine grow up step by step, I feel like "it is not easy for us to go this way..." Haha.

I like it very much, a rare treasure. The writing is fluent. It was very good in the first part, but it is still improving in the second part. My Wife is My God (Confirmation. JPG). There are many analogies with vivid images and strange angles, which are very relatable to people. The plots are intertwined. The wife has a great imagination and can express it very accurately. There is no sense of fragmentation where the imagination exists independently. The logic is rigorous and the emotions can be controlled freely. Even if the heroine is currently in a poor mental state, I feel that the wife is handling it very restrainedly. She is not just crazy or so crazy that she can't stop herself. I love the heroine very much. She has gone through a difficult journey and has grown up while still retaining some valuable qualities. The other characters also have their own character arcs. They are carefully crafted characters, each with their own charm, and they are not just flat tools. Summary: You will definitely not lose money if you enter the pit, and you may even make a profit. The only trouble is that when I encounter immortals, I can't eat enough food and grass, and it's easy to be short of literature. It's really a happy trouble (spread your hands).

It can be said to be a fresh and refined article in Tomato. The book shortage after more than half a year is finally saved. The writing style is very delicate and humorous at the same time. It penetrates people's hearts. There is always a point that makes people moved and has the motivation to keep reading. So far, it can be seen that the author has carefully crafted every character, especially the protagonist, who has grasped the boundary between ordinary and extraordinary very skillfully, without making people feel aggrieved or too smooth or fake. From the first part to the current copy, the content is very substantial, the plot has ups and downs, and some places are really immersive, making me feel worried for the protagonist. Obviously this book is very exciting, not even a little bit better than those chronicle-like novels, but the popularity still doesn't rise (Tomato is looking for a scolding, isn't it?). This is a very exciting and fascinating novel in my eyes. I hope this novel will be popular and I will always support you. I don't know what I said after talking so much, and I can't describe my inner feelings in words. In short, the author is very good, and the novel is also very good (this is my first time writing a long review. If any language offends me, I apologize in advance)

Following this from the first book! You are worth it! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen a lot of women's unlimited flow. I really like the group portraits. It's not that I'm crazy about Goldfinger, but I can really see our Ono making progress! I hope Ono can regain his memory, keep moving forward, and explore new ruins (◦˙▽˙◦)

I don't believe the Tomato ratings anymore. I followed this one after reading the previous one. It is far better than many high-scoring novels. The rhythm is tight, the plot development is attractive, and many settings are also very creative. It's fun to read and I hope the author will read more.

It's very exciting. The style of some places is a bit like Doomsday Paradise. It's quite interesting and the plot is also exciting. It's not the kind of slobbery novel, which is quite rare. It's also not a cool novel that starts with a big bang. I like this kind of growth-oriented female protagonist. But there are also shortcomings. There is no main line. The background of the heroine's story is not clearly explained. There are too many omissions that make the reader a little confused, as if this is not a complete novel but the second part of the novel. Finally, the update is a bit slow. Isn't the author a fool?

Well, there are a lot of riddles at the beginning of each copy, which is not very attractive to me, but once I read a few chapters, the atmosphere gradually builds up, the characters become more three-dimensional, and the smooth text and dialogue will start to make me want to stop. The setting and plot have a unique and eerie beauty. The reading process is like the reader wiping out pieces of antique artifacts in the fog. There is a strong sense of dusty history that has accumulated over time but is unknown to others. Although the settings of the characters are all modern and fashionable, they have to fight against "ruins and aliens" that look shabby and ancient. How can it not be considered cute in contrast~