
This Mage Is a Little Improper
这个魔法师有点不正经
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Not much to see. Japanese light novels and anime depicting the characters of the bad streets before. It's the kind of harem story that doesn't have any poisonous points and can be read without leaving the brain behind. Those who are younger and have not passed the second phase of high school should be able to read it.
I have read many books, and this is the first one that I feel is worth pursuing. The characters and plot are very good. This book is a cool book, but it is much better than other cool books. For example, the protagonist is not a reborn person, has no system, and does not have a very powerful cheat. With his photographic memory, he can quickly learn combat skills and become stronger step by step through constant fighting. The female characters in it are also very well portrayed without being pretentious or pretentious. When the protagonist was still weak, Lu Tu helped the protagonist develop a bond with the protagonist through various things. This book is a success as a multi-female protagonist in a Western fantasy world.
It's super good-looking. I don't know why the rating is not even 9 points, but after reading many books on Tomato, I feel a little tired. This book just made me feel bright. I highly recommend it! ! ! It's pretty, don't let the name put you off, the back part is super pretty [adoration][adoration]
It's nice to read, and the harem story is also well written. It's normal for a powerful person to have a harem, right? The emperor has a harem with three thousand beauties. I also like to watch single female protagonists, but we watch both. Watching everything will only make me nutritionally balanced [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Let me see how long it has been
I haven't commented on it at all, so I'm just going to give my opinion here. 1: The writing is relaxed and not overwhelming. 2: Excellent harem novel, no stallion, every heroine is vivid 3: If you are particularly picky and only want to read top-notch books like Tokahi or Alien Beasts, you can move on. But if you want to read a relatively good book, this one will definitely satisfy you. The premise is that "the brain circuit is normal and you are a normal person." 4: Last but not least, the author seems very idle, and every comment is basically (Currently I see about 100) No, I saw a lot of people saying that there are too many female protagonists, and that the author can't write. No, buddy, you nb write it. The author has said that there are too many female protagonists, whether you like it or not, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables. Don't you understand such a simple truth? I don't mean you can't speak. If you have suggestions, you can make them, and the author is happy to listen. But don't just complain about it when you see it, okay? How about saying it's ugly? You nb, if you don't like to read it, write it yourself, or you can change it and like to find pictures there [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
Very worth looking forward to. Some people say that there are too many female characters and they all fall in love with the protagonist. Bad reviews, bah! Take a closer look at the protagonist's behavior style and growth path. It is no different in many Tomato novels. Let me say, in fact, the description of the heroine is a bit thin. The most commendable thing in this aspect is Gengsu, especially the oval minister. The many supporting female characters have distinct personalities and souls. This novel is worth reading. I think the author has great potential. If he can stick to three books, he will definitely become a god.
Western fantasy, genius style, multiple female protagonists, relatively smooth writing, and no low-speed language descriptions (personally, I hate male protagonists who make loud noises and speak dirty words). Most of the storylines are driven by female characters, and misogyny creeps in. However, there are no cliché plots of the female protagonist holding back the female protagonist and her family preventing the male and female protagonists from being together. The female characters have relatively distinct personalities. I personally like the daily interactions between the male protagonist and the beauty. The male protagonist must have a bit of a succubus physique. This is a bit of a fantasy, but it is also a standard feature of Shuangwen and has little impact...
I read more than 200 updated chapters in one go. It combines Eastern and Western themes. After almost 200 chapters, it begins to fully show its strength in the mainland (the two masters are currently at the top of the mainland, second only to gods? They may enter this realm after the realm is loosened). The protagonist is not a virgin, has no system, and has no time travel and rebirth, so there will be foreshadowing or strengthening of strength in the beginning. There are many female protagonists, unlike other novels that slow down the pace. I look forward to the plot later. I haven't seen many western-style movies before. This is the first one, and it left a deep impression. The author will also answer questions in the comment area, and he works very hard. I give 5 points to the work and the author [blowing kiss]
This novel has a fast pace and a rich plot. I couldn't stop reading it. The plots are well connected. I often stayed up late to read it until I got over it [face covering] The author's writing style is very good and the details are in place. You can start with it. Come on author, I'm optimistic about you [Read carefully]
It's quite interesting. I haven't read a book with rich emotional lines like this for a long time. I feel that the whole structure is a bit similar to Battle Through the Sky or something like that. The previous ones are all very good, and I quite like the multiple female protagonists. It's been a while since I've watched this kind of traditional fantasy with multiple female protagonists. However, the writing from the beginning of the Champions Cup to the latest chapter 250 is not very good. The author also said that he would write a lot of battle scenes. The previous chapter was already quite obscene. It should be shown here, but the result is still so obscene. After seeing this, most people probably don't want to see the author writing the protagonist to be clever and arrogant. Tactical layout is also part of the protagonist's presentation, but first of all, you are writing a web article. When writing about team combat, there must be a prominent point. This point is usually the protagonist, but you have spent a long time writing and no one is highlighted. It's too peaceful. Second, the so-called tactical layout is a bit based on the answers to the questions. There are some logical loopholes in the writing. If it is short, you can read it without thinking, but if it is too much, it will not work. It is better to write normally. For example, write more changes in the scene and battle details instead of going over them in one stroke. Finally, start to solve the problem with the protagonist group as the center. The problem of a somewhat empty battle description, rhythm and content has always existed, but now that I have to write about the battle scenes in large lengths, the problem has been amplified. From the beginning to the present, most of the battles involving the protagonist seem to be about being beaten by the heroine. The rest of the time is either a slut or trying to be clever. In addition, the few normal battles that have finally happened are mostly unsatisfactory and lack content. The protagonist is a dual practitioner of magic and martial arts, and the two lines of magic are still not combined together, and they are still somewhat separate. The combat theory part is completely ignored. If you ask me, it is the world view that I wrote anyway. It doesn't matter if people die if they gasp for breath. You just make it up yourself. It's all your own settings anyway. As for the female protagonist, she will definitely have to pick it up in the future, otherwise it will be a bit weird if the rhythm suddenly stops. There are now 12 scheduled to be collected. Some of the harems have not yet been fully developed and the plots have not been fully written. For example, the one about Clara and the elves, etc. Clara has been put on the agenda, but it is a little late. She is obviously the first one to meet. As a result, it feels like she has been marginalized before the plot has been written. Including those who have been marginalized, such as Fei Na and others. It's a common problem with many female protagonists, and it's also the reason why some people don't like harem stories. Anyway, I hope the author can improve it as much as possible in the future.