Online Game: I'm the Daoist Heir and the Demon Lord?!

The current progress is 120 chapters. It is one of the few online games that integrate reality themes that I can watch comfortably. This track is very difficult to write. There are many pitfalls in the world view, numerical values, and plot. It is really not easy to write this like it is now. It's a bit fun to cheat but not brainless, and it can also be interspersed with some worldly feelings. It doesn't say that the writing is perfect and it doesn't require it to be non-toxic. To this extent, it deserves a big five-star encouragement. It really feels like there are no more tomatoes. I feel like the plot is a bit too long, and it takes a little patience.

The background story is set very well, and Diudiu is touching. To sum up the four major endings of Novice Village, ending one: taking on the task of village chief and killing Nian Nian's father is one of the bad endings. Ending 2: Helping the village chief clear away the evidence of the Shark Man's murder, one of the bad endings. Ending 3: Find evidence to kill the village chief and make the evidence public, a good ending. Ending 4: Trigger the hidden plot of Nian Nian's father, defeat the village chief with him, and unlock the seed of Nian Nian's memory. The true ending [eat melon] I have to say that the author must be a high-end player.

Ever since I watched Foreign Persimmon, my mind has been filled with either the system or rebirth, time travel or traveling through books, security or cleaning, courier delivery or food delivery, richest man or trillions, eavesdropping or being overheard. I can't stop. The plot is very exciting and the content is very rich. It's a drama that every audience should watch. The visuals are so strong that I watched it with gusto and couldn't stop watching it. It's really addictive. The beautiful scenery is full of surprises and touches. Simply my new favorite.

I feel good about this book. I have written more than 400 chapters so far and I have read 300 chapters. The pace in the early stage is relatively slow, which is actually due to the slow upgrade. I feel that the plot is quite good and not too slow. It needs some foreshadowing and some details. This book is mainly about the plot, there are many characters, and the writing needs to be spread out, so the pace feels slow. Then I read the comments section and said that the protagonist entered a declining sect on the side of the road. The main plot is obviously on this sect. Except for the Qingyue Palace (I haven't seen a detailed description of Buddhism so far, it may be related to the protagonist's roommate), other top sects are like good people. The author's hint is quite obvious. I guess some of them are bad guys wearing a pair of pants. What's the use of the protagonist going in? Being used as an ox and a horse, brother. The protagonist's friends are not considered poisonous. They say they have dormitory roommates, but now their roommates treat the protagonist as their father. Are they poisonous? The heroines are also measured and do not get close to other people of the opposite sex. I have seen that there are almost no plots where the heroines have emotional interactions with other people of the opposite sex. In the secret realm, Su Hongling pretends to be a Tang Yin and takes advantage of Li Youde (it seems to be called this). There is also a yellow hair. I guess it is because the author felt that there were no other events in the story when he returned home. As for the guild, it is right not to add the protagonist, because after adding it, the plot of this book will originally be more and slower to upgrade. If you add a guild, you will have to take care of the guild after passing the main secret realm. The plot of the guild will unfold in a formula. After the protagonist has passed the secret realm, other guilds will come to cause trouble. Will the protagonist suppress other guilds in the past? It's not troublesome. When the time comes to write it, the pace will be slower. What's the point of writing it? Anyway, I think it's still worth reading at this point. Judging from the current progress, this book will definitely be long. The protagonist is still growing up, but the battle scenes feel a bit boring and don't reflect the protagonist's hang-up (it may also reflect it, but I don't feel comfortable enough).

The setting and plot are classic, but the logic and rhythm are better than most of the same genre. The writing is quite satisfactory, and it also has its own unique worldview to attract readers. The protagonist has all the qualifications to win all the way, which is very satisfying. There is no deliberate pressure on combat power. There are statistics. The calculation of the damage multiplication zone is quite rigorous. The values ​​​​and skills are listed separately and explained, so that people will not be confused. It is good. However, there will be a vest at the back, which is a very classic hidden identity. Considering the plot, it is reasonable not to be too ostentatious during the development period, but when reading it, I always feel a sense of frustration in my heart, you understand... The vest is like this, but the speed of breaking the horse is quite fast, which does not affect the viewing experience. And the subject matter with multiple female protagonists will definitely involve Shura field. The author's emotional description is not detailed and a little unfamiliar. It can be seen that he is a newcomer and needs to improve. Also, judging from the current progress, the overall plot is slow to pick up. It is estimated that I can write another 1 million words. It is quite good, and there are still some shortcomings in the ability to read [face covering]. After 300 chapters, it is very dragging, and it is a bit boring to read. I will talk about it later, but why is the popularity of this book so low? Generally speaking, a lot of people will read interesting articles about online games like Tomato. Anyway, keep going, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle [I also strongly recommend it]

There are basically no poisonous points. There are only three confirmed heroines in the latest chapter, the saint, the witch and the younger sister. However, I personally think that the plot of the "dungeon" should be reduced a bit. There are 50.60 Chapters written in a secret realm, which is a bit delayed. Overall, the writing is pretty good.

The most enjoyable online game novel I have read so far. There are also some bad points, such as the roommate part, which is dispensable. The beginning of this book is not as good as the plot at the end, but it has potential. Come on, author.

In fact, it's not bad. It's pretty good-looking in every sense of the word. There's no rush to advance the plot, and the pace isn't too slow either. It's comfortable to watch. There is nothing bad about standard cool writing. Good-looking cool writing is good writing.

To be honest, the setting is actually pretty good, but the pace of the plot is slow, which is still acceptable. There are so few people watching it, so I estimate the rating will be around 8.5 To 8.9. If the pace of the plot picks up, it should be able to go up to 9.

This novel currently has 112,000 words, and there is no golden elixir or fusion yet. It is probably running towards 3 million words, but the daily updates are slow, so it is easy to collapse.