Focus Up and Reach the Pinnacle

Looks good! I like this kind of lone wolf! I have read a lot of space novels before and I don't understand why the protagonist needs to form a team. Getting partners and stuff like that. Obviously doing this in a place full of killing and betrayal, how can we show that the protagonist is unique and does not fall in line with the rest of the world? Describe the protagonist as a light in the darkness! I really can't stand this type of genre, so I can't stand it. Will this reality really work out after all? For the Chinese, they will definitely pursue immortality and immortality in the extraordinary world. Although I don't know how to explain it, it just has a strong appeal. Author quick update! Nice! Love watching! The protagonist must kill decisively! Cold-blooded! Efficient!

Platinum capital, update quickly, keep you awake at night

The author's writing is great. I hope you won't keep updating it. If possible, can you add one or two points to the protagonist's attributes when his skills break through? After all, the attributes are too weak and it is impossible to have skills alone. Also, the author, may I ask if there is a female protagonist? I hope there is no heroine

It's good to read, but there are too few chapters. Two chapters a day is really not enough. And authors, don't be fooled. There are many books chasing the author and running away with the outline. As long as the author can persevere, you can take away the five stars.

The lone wolf, killing randomly, has the shadow of "Reincarnation L Yuan". If you like watching reincarnation, you will definitely like this one, but the writing is not that good yet, but the author said that he will practice more

It looks good, but it takes a lot of effort to write dozens of chapters to write a world. Tomatoes are free, so you don't make any money at all. I can only say that the author has to work hard!

The protagonist chooses swordsmanship as his infinitely improved skill. The specific reason is only one word: handsome. This is the first and biggest poisonous point in this book. The author gave many explanations for this choice, including but not limited to 1. The sword is not weaker than any other, 2. In theory, no matter what you choose, it is the same, and the focus is on later development. In my opinion, these reasons are untenable. The explanations given by the author are obviously superficial and brought into the author's perspective. We need to think about the actual situation. The protagonist, as a time traveler, is involved in the infinite flow. The foreseeable follow-up is various crises, as well as life and death choices, and the protagonist in front of him will make the most important and critical first choice in life that will accompany him throughout his life, deciding whether to live or die. At such an important moment, the first and only reason for making the choice is actually because he is handsome. The author does not describe anything similar to the protagonist. He has practiced swords before and is very good at using swords. He feels that the sword is his natural weapon. He is very talented in kendo and has a very high vision for swords. His dream since he was a child is to practice swords, etc. Using handsomeness as the only reason to choose skills in "unimportant" places certainly works. So, the author, please tell me, the only skill chosen by the protagonist can increase the level infinitely. Is he in an ""unimportant"" place? To sum up, my main point is that it is understandable that choices that affect life are made because of handsomeness, which can be understood as a kind of dream and longing. But if this choice is also related to one's own future life and death, then ensuring one's own life must come first, and personal wishes come second. However, the protagonist completely ignores the first place here and only sees the second. As a reader, of course I want to see the protagonist's skills be cool, but I hope it can be written more reasonably.

It's okay, but you can't rely entirely on dungeons to improve your skills, right? You can build some kind of training room or something, spend money to improve your combat power, and you can also learn Braille.

The writing is good and original, but it's a pity that there is no traffic. If the title of the book is not good, the editor will probably tell you that you need to change the title to attract more people. The name is also useless, (bankruptcy in the beginning, sword in the end) is an example of a bad name.

It's a good read, the pace is moderate, and the protagonist's relationship isn't too outrageous. There's really no female protagonist and not many female supporting characters. Even if there are female supporting characters, they're there to advance the plot or make deals with the protagonist.