Imaginary Number Paradise: Friends, Praise the Sun!

It's well-written so far, with no major flaws and a hint of reincarnation. I still hope the author can forge their own path. Since you're writing about the sun, I suggest you move towards the soul-based genre. The first few worlds could be adapted into film and television works, while the later ones should be original worlds. As long as the power system doesn't collapse and you can write the later parts, you'll be a legend on Tomato.

The pacing and overall feel are great; it has that Paradise vibe. And since they clearly developed a new power system, why are people still saying it's copying end-of-days skills? I'm really looking forward to the protagonist entering the original world. As long as it doesn't fall apart later on, it'll definitely be a masterpiece. Also, I suggest locking the author up in a dark room and making them update five times a day; it's too little now, not enough to keep you entertained.

Yes, yes, it's still developing. I have reservations about Bai Ye. I understand Bai Ye. I hope it surpasses Bai Ye later. It's just that the authors I follow don't all have good health; I hope you don't fall into that category.

Oh, so you've borrowed the model from the Paradise of Reincarnation?

Write less about techniques and more about the sun (metaphorical) aspects. Aren't mages more powerful than warriors?

Well, I feel like the sun and heavy weapons go better together; the knife feels more like a small-scale skirmish... Emmm... A small suggestion.

It seems pretty good, so why is the rating so low? 😢

Keep it up, author! It's great!!!

Not bad, right? The tabby cat is kind of funny, hahaha.

It's not a long story, but the author has written it very well. However, the danger and reward are disproportionate, which doesn't quite fit the amusement park's principle of equivalent exchange.