Game Invasion: I Just Want to Die, but I Slay My Way Through Every Dungeon

Every character has flesh and blood. Fresh. The story is also very good. I'm so touched. It's really beautiful.

It looks good, the rhythm is tight, and the interactions are sweet. The characters are carefully designed and not broken. The writing is not bad. The author is very active and cute. There are more every day. However, there are some shortcomings. The various emotions and changes in the characters' hearts are not very obvious. The emotional line is a bit light, but the characters in the novel are not It is not the author himself. It will be difficult for the author to analyze their delicate emotions and express them accurately. It will be even more difficult for novice writers. Some of them will be too greasy or middle-of-the-road, so there is no big problem if it is less or less obvious. Overall, it is a very good book. Please give it a try, the author, it will definitely become popular! !

This is the third author I have read after Zhi Ben Jie and Hao Ren who really shocked my heart. I'm very curious about how rich the author's life experience is to conceive such a dreamy world view. The first copy brought me the romance of reading fairy tales. I was tired of reading the horror infinite flow. This book is simply a breath of fresh air. It gives me the illusion that I am not reading but traveling. Xiaoyu's characters are also very full, the plot is compact, and the writing is online. I like [shy][shy] I am willing to be the author's traveler, so I give ten stars

I think the meeting and falling in love between Yu and Xi is quite logical and smooth. I also like the characters of Yu and Xi very much. Yu has a faint sense of death, and Xi has a feeling of harm. It really pokes me when I see him. The taro balls are also very cute, like the two cubs ＿little scorpions＿ , the two little guys Ye and Cheng have a very good relationship. For now, this article is very healthy. I agree with many of the ideas. The descriptions of horror are also very touching, especially when listening/reading in the middle of the night, but I still look forward to what the author has to say. Well, please give me a boost for the author to update! ! ! Here to support you! ! ! Now let me tell you, although it is a bit scary, there will be humorous parts interspersed in it. Don't worry, it won't be too scary [Love]

Lin Yooyu's personality charm, her willingness to live towards death, her kindness to others even though she has endured great pain, her courage and tenacity are very attractive to me. The writer's writing style is also very good and the plot rhythm is great. In short, I highly praise [send heartfelt] I forgot to mention it. My friends are also very nice. It makes people feel warm [crying]

It has a very good subject matter, and the characters are also very rich, but the author's writing style seems very awkward. If the author's writing style was better and not so bland, it should be able to hit a 9.5

Super super super beautiful! Madam, you update a lot every day! ! ! I like it very much! Hope it becomes popular quickly! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's tied, it's quite interesting, and people constantly doubt the author's background. For example, he studied philosophy, and the ingredients are extremely complex, such as Schrödinger's cat and quantum mechanics. Then various game settings are mixed into the text, and there are many conflicting issues. In the form of a story, I read it and think about it, but it seems that I just want to say something, just scratch my head. Sometimes I am very angry and find it very interesting. But when it comes to in-depth thinking, it doesn't seem to be there, and it doesn't seem to stop at the last minute. Instead, it's a bit like a wild horse, talking about whatever comes to mind, but it can be told in a story. It seems very philosophical, as if it is trying to argue something, but it jumps out and says "no, there is no logic." This mental state is very spiritual, very interesting and very interesting. The only and most difficult thing to accept is one of the characters. I don't quite understand the original intention of designing this character. He is not cute and lovable, but he is too self-sufficient and has no sense of self-esteem. The other characters are also infinitely tolerant of this. There is no growth at all after more than 300 chapters. Even if they have started to add plug-ins, they are still there. I can't see the character's growth and group positioning (no, there is no need for such a mascot, don't scorpions sound good? Don't bugs and puppets sound good?) Of course, it is impossible to delete this character at this point, and she is still a deputy CP. We can only hope that the settings added later will make her less obtrusive. Except for that character (no, this character makes people angry, super angry, and sick of stupidity), the writing is very interesting, but the author has also buried a lot of pitfalls. I hope it will all come true in the end, hahaha. It doesn't matter if it doesn't come true. After all, every big event will have very nervous (crossed out) and very spiritual speculation. Come on, author, look forward to it.

The subject matter is more interesting than a simple infinite flow, the world view is huge, the protagonist is neither brainless nor aggrieved (you can't be aggrieved even if you want to die, hahaha [laughing evilly]), the writing style is also very good, anyway, it has reached the passing line in my heart (a noob's writing style will really not be able to stand it [face covering]), I hope more people can read it

The setting of the protagonist is very interesting, the core of the template is very stable, and the characters are quite three-dimensional. The plot setting is very good, and the logic is not brainless. It is very interesting, including the "unconstrained" setting of various props. Including some settings, they are relatively new and very beautiful \(//∇//)\ Thank you for writing (ง•̀_•́)ง