Endless Apocalypse: Survival Is Just Too Hard

Ahem, of course I wrote it myself and got five stars.

It's not female-oriented. I've only read Chapter 6 and there are already three words that are obviously insulting to women. I originally wanted to give it two stars, but someone in the comments said that 80% of the characters are female, so forget it.

It's not that cookie-cutter and innovative, and the writing and plot make people want to read on. I feel that the first copy is a bit long, but to be honest, the writing can support the plot and it doesn't look so boring. There are quite a lot of female characters, accounting for 70 to 80%, and the words are very particular, but the number of words is a bit short and not enough to read.

The article is clear and logical, and if you like the feeling of your brain being online, I recommend giving it a try. Type girls dormitory + group portrait + apocalypse Plant some grass first

It's pretty good. It's really the best article of this type I've seen on Tomato so far. On the one hand, there is emotional delicacy. The so-called delicacy does not mean repeatedly describing the character's heart, but being able to write the character's emotions appropriately and timely, making the character fuller and laying down the foreshadowing. In this partial portrait article, everyone is well sketched, and there are no overly flat characters, but at the same time, it is rare and valuable to not dominate the scene. On the other hand, in terms of content, because I understood a little wrong, the first copy was a bit surprising to me, but aside from this, it is very rare to be able to write a routine that seems to have become rotten and has no new ideas. It is attractive and rare. However, from the first copy, I can only see the author's control of the plot and foreshadowing. I cannot yet evaluate the creativity of the copy. I have finished reading the second copy now, and I can say that it is indeed lacking. The first is the plot issue. The rhythm can be controlled more compactly, or the coloring of necessary descriptions can be increased, and unnecessary descriptions can be reduced. (It's hard for me to explain this clearly, because I haven't written it before, but from the reader's point of view, it feels a bit slow. Accurate control of the plot can undoubtedly better draw readers into the world of the book. Of course, this kind of improvement is not easy, so you can take your time) , and the other thing is the coloring of the characters. Well, I have no objection to the setting of the characters. Just stick to your own ideas, but the shaping techniques can be more mature. For example, Jiang and Lin in this dungeon made me feel weak. Thinking from a rational point of view, I think this kind of plot development is normal. After all, this is only their second dungeon, but why do they have this uncomfortable feeling? If you want to improve, I think you can think about it from the perspective of narrative techniques, angles, etc., Not simply deleting the plot, but enhancing the expressiveness: yes, the characters are painful and helpless when facing difficulties, leading to despair, but at the same time, another power arises, and this power is reflected in the characters , but it can also arouse resonance in the hearts of readers, allowing readers to focus on this kind of unyielding struggle (but this resonance is not a pile of words, but just the right description) (well, if you continue to think about it, you can also read some Mugenliu works with this kind of writing power). I think the same setting can be presented in different ways with completely different feelings. Good description can make the characters more vital and attractive. . . . (Actually, what I said is a bit illogical, but the meaning is roughly this)

Nice! The setting is novel, Sister Qiu is super handsome, and the protagonists and supporting characters are not flat pieces of paper. It is rare to find a novel that is suitable for serious reading. Great support for the author, and I look forward to the plot in the future!

I've read Chapter 100, and I feel good about it, but I still wish there would be less female suffering (let men bear the suffering), and also, who is the heroine's CP? Is it Li Chanyuan?

The plot is compact and story-telling, and the writing is very transparent. Come on, write about a woman's high-class big sister.

The plot is very interesting. This is the first time I have seen this kind of opening without knowing it is a copy. It is very novel.

It looks good, but I don't know why no one sees it 🤔[pouts]