Starting Out as an NPC in a Strange World

It's a good read, the writing is excellent, and it's witty and humorous enough. For a new book with fewer than 100 chapters, over 20 chapters of memories are somewhat excessive (the longest I've ever read), and might be a bit off-putting. However, the timing of the memory insertions is excellent.

It's 1:12 AM now. I just finished reading this book; the flashback chapter is over. The author successfully scared me to tears twice, and I cried once... Kids, I'm freaked out! I still have to finish my homework with my best friend later. She said she's watching a Korean drama, but I'm too scared to get out of bed right now... I'm totally freaked out. Today is going to be a really freakish day.

He seemed to hear the girl's breathing; she was gradually falling asleep. But even knowing that she would most likely never wake up, He, who had mastered the "rules" of this space, remained motionless. She simply stood quietly in place. She suddenly remembered that her granddaughter would always whine to her when she was woken up from her afternoon nap, wanting to sleep a little longer, and she…

Honestly, this memory is too long, and there's a bit of a disconnect between it and the present; it feels like reading two books. The author is being a bit slow; they've spent a lot of time on the main plot but haven't progressed at all.

I'm currently following up on this review, and for me, I found it successful. While you might find the writing a bit drawn out, the content is very detailed. I actually prefer slower-paced storylines; a slower pace allows for better character development and backstory polishing. Unlike traditional dual-female-lead novels, she doesn't introduce both female leads immediately.

The article quality is definitely not the problem, but the author's pacing is a bit poor. The opening was filled with excessive filler, which probably deterred many readers. I've already read the latest installment; will the author give it 5 stars and then re-update it depending on the update schedule?

This is truly a wonderfully written book! The character designs of the main cast are incredibly interesting, especially the portrayal of the protagonist. He's a bit eccentric and somewhat abstract, which I love even more. Up to chapter 70 of the second volume, there are no major problems or glaring flaws, except for the 30-chapter flashback in the first volume, which is a bit too long and…

It's really well-written, though a bit wordy. I glanced up and realized this section is over 30 chapters long 🤦. It's worth reading and definitely worth saving up. It's a slow burn, really, so slow that the second female lead (presumably) only appears briefly.

It's so good! The memory section could be a book in itself 🤦 It is indeed a slow burn, but the writing is good. However, there are too many irrelevant plot points, and the main storyline only starts to advance around chapter 75.

This memory is incredibly long… After watching it, I felt a strange sense of bewilderment... But it is indeed quite beautiful...