Starting Out as an NPC in a Strange World

It looks good, the writing is online, and the humor is enough For a new book with less than a hundred chapters, the memory of more than twenty chapters is more or less too long (the longest I have read so far), and it may be a bit discouraging, but I have to say that the timing of inserting the memory is great. The memory content seems chaotic and fragmented, but this is exactly the effect the author wants to create. It is very consistent with the brain of a person who has two or three souls spliced together. That is, it is very reasonable. The content of the memory almost supplements the background of this novice village, paving the way for the appearance of another heroine. But what is very puzzling is that the part about memory that I want to know the most is the part where the protagonist also wants to know but has no memory. I thought it would be revealed in this memory but it didn't, so the author, you still want to interest me (pointing) In the end, the protagonist wakes up from his memory and slowly straightens out the chaotic memories. In fact, it also smoothes out the thoughts of our readers. In order to avoid repetition, some laughs are also added (thumbs up) In general, this paragraph is a bonus for readers who can read it to the end (I wanted to use a metaphor here but didn't think of it, so let's pretend I have used it (finger)) Overall, it's very well written! Looking forward to It feels a bit strange to integrate a new system. It seems that the already large world view has become larger. It can be understood that it is to improve the funnyness of the article, but it is more or less a little bit, abrupt, and superfluous (pointing fingers) Well, mainly because of the abruptness Okay, the protagonist also complained about this on the next page. . . (Lost in thought)

It's 1.12 In the morning. I just read this book. The memory is over. The author succeeded in scaring me to tears twice and once... Kids, I'm so excited. I have to catch up on my homework with my best friend later. My best friend said she is watching Korean dramas, but I don't dare to get up now... I'm so excited. Today is a very explosive day.

He seemed to hear the girl's breathing, as the girl was gradually falling asleep. However, even though he knew that the girl would most likely fall asleep and not wake up, he, who had mastered the "rules" of this space, still made no move. She just stood there quietly. She suddenly thought that every time her granddaughter was woken up from her nap, she would coquettishly ask her to sleep for a while, and she would accompany the girl quietly every time like she did now. She would let the watermelon in her hand gradually lose its coolness, and the sweet juice from the pulp would drip down her palm with the sunlight, and eventually melt into the white clouds of the afternoon. I want to cry every time I watch this episode, it's really good! Don't use the family knife to kill me <(ToT)>

To be honest, this memory is too long and feels a bit disconnected. It feels like I am reading two books. The author's writing is a bit blurry. He wrote the main plot for a long time and didn't advance it at all.

I am now in the state of reviewing. After I read this book, it was a success for me. When you read it, you may feel that the author is slow in writing, but the content is very detailed. On the contrary, I prefer the story to be slow. When the plot slows down, the character story will be polished better. She and the traditional double heroine The story is different. She doesn't appear at the beginning. The story uses the perspective of one of the parties to create a strong sense of immersion and suspense. So far, the story is more important than the emotional line. The flow is long and the emotions are naturally coming out. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. With such a rhythm of writing the plot, the relationship blossoms and I feel very hopeful. Finally, I want to say that it is really top-notch. The first chapter has been completed and the middle part takes up a lot of memories, but I recommend reading it. It supplements the background of the characters and enriches the image. The refreshing feeling when you play straight with the insider later is something you can't experience if you skip it and treat it as a side story. I'm looking forward to the author's subsequent storyline development. I was also preparing to write a novel. I suddenly finished reading it today. I saw that the second part was probably unfinished. The first part was good. I took the time to read it, but I don't recommend it.

There is absolutely no problem with the quality of the article, but the author's control of his own rhythm is a bit poor. He poured a lot of water at the beginning and persuaded many people to back down. I guess I have seen the latest. Will I check the update if I get 5 stars?

It's a really great book. The characters of the protagonist are really interesting, especially the description of the protagonist. The protagonist is a bit eccentric and a bit abstract, which I like even more. As of the 70th chapter of the second volume, there are no major problems in the whole book, and there are no major poisonous points, except for the front part. The first volume of 30 chapters of memories is a bit too long, which slightly affects the perception, but there is no major problem. Although the memory chapters are long, they lay a lot of foreshadowing and explain many settings more clearly. Overall, it is a great book. Please keep updating the author. One chapter a day is really not enough.

It's really well written, but it's a bit verbose. When I looked up this section of my memory, I realized that I had written more than 30 chapters [face-covering]. It's worth reading and watching. It's true that it's slow to heat up. It's so slow that the second heroine (suspected) appeared in a short section.

It's so beautiful, the memory section could be a separate book [face covering] It was indeed a slow start when I went there, and the writing was pretty good, but there were too many irrelevant plots, and the main plot didn't start to advance until around chapter 75.

This memory is too long... After reading it, I felt inexplicably confused... But it's really pretty…