The Clerk at the Paranormal Management Bureau

For me, except for the ambiguous emotional line, the plot is really good, but if there are some monologues by the author interspersed in the middle, I will feel a bit out of touch. I think I can add a small theater at the end of the chapter to write monologues or reduce the monologues, but there is one thing to say, it is a great book, please come on, author

The plot is very good, compact and not sloppy, but I kept guessing about the other heroine in the beginning. I was scared to death and thought I was going to buy a stock. I did guess whether it was Xun Shuo, but it turned out not to be hahaha. The plot is very organized, and the characters are very clear. I really enjoyed writing it. Very good, it's rare to see such a well-written infinite flow double heroine. There is a plot that digs holes and foreshadows the story. The other characters are also very well portrayed. Not only is the protagonist's IQ online, but she is not completely brainless. The author has to work hard. I don't know why there are so few people watching it. Maybe it's because the emotional line is too slow? But I think it's pretty good, it's written very carefully, and there may be some points that need polishing. Personally, I think some of the plots may be a bit jumpy. I'm a book reader, but if I'm distracted, I might not understand the next paragraph. It means the plots are quite compact, with a lot of useful information, but not watery. Come on, the above is just my personal opinion. [Sending my heart], this book is highly recommended, and it's really written with care.

It looks good, even though it has a low rating, but it is really good-looking, and if you don't lie to others, it is a puppy. Finally, I came across a book that was so eloquent that I couldn't stop reading it. Of course, there are still some small flaws in the middle. For example, the ending of the dungeon that simulates the apocalypse is a bit unclear, and the campus chapter is also a bit unclear. But they are all very beautiful, very beautiful. Finally, I look forward to a big update of the extra chapter. Finally, I want to say one more thing: Lin, you are really a sinful woman.

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Personally, I think it looks pretty good. In the early stage, although the emotional line is relatively vague, the content is also very exciting. It can be regarded as a very good book with two female protagonists. I really recommend all book lovers to read it [I'm about to cry]. I've read this book many times before, but due to the lack of ratings, I was fooled into thinking it wasn't very good. Now I want to go back in time and slap myself.

I've read more than 100 chapters, and it's pretty good. Although I feel like there are a bit few post-scripts and surprising plots, at least I didn't find any bad points. Why doesn't anyone read it?

It turns out that the heroine is... Then who can make up for my lack of Mrs. Xunhe [crying]

Who is the other heroine?

I'm looking for Mrs. Rose, can you help me?

Maya good looking Boss, I want to follow you