Dragon Ball: I Became the Strongest Warrior Through Half-Immortal Cultivation

When the combat power reaches 50,000, you still can't fly, and you can't deflate the inflated eggs 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦

It's slow to enter the topic (Chapter 6: Worship the Turtle Immortal as my disciple, what is the meaning of the previous article) The narrative is long-winded, the sense of substitution is poor, and the content of the book feels fragmented: 1. Double time travellers, affecting the sense of substitution (poison) 2. The system has high intelligence and affects the character of the protagonist (long-winded) 3. Exposure to technology too early affects the main line (fragmentation) 4. The description on the side is how naughty Kame Sennin is, which affects the character of the protagonist and the strength of the plug-in (digging a hole for yourself, and the sense of substitution is poor) [pinch][pinch][pinch] The focus of this book is not the collision between the fantasy system and Dragon Ball. Click here to see a big picture.

I have read about 70 chapters so far. The author did not set up some of the content at the beginning well. It can be seen that the author is still a newbie, and some plot settings are not perfect enough. Especially the unreasonable settings of 50,000 combat power have been criticized many times. I think the author wants to make the protagonist stronger. Yes, but it's not well set. The plot unfolded in the first part of Dragon Ball. I think it would be more reasonable to set it at a few hundred combat power. This is something the author needs to pay attention to. The plot development after chapter 20 is okay, and the setting and other aspects have been improved a lot. I hope the author can continue to grow [I understand]

You can't fly with 50,000 combat power. You can't believe it. 50,000 Combat power has not yet mastered Qi 😅. Moreover, with such high combat power, he can swim until he is exhausted. The boss's combat power is so powerful. At the beginning, little Wukong's combat power probably did not exceed 100. He participated in martial arts competitions and traveled half of the world without being so miserable.

It was so exciting, it made me feel embarrassed.

My personal recommendation is to start reading the novel from Chapter 6. From there, the plot is more relevant. After reading it for a while, I feel that some of the content in the back is pretty good. Please give it a boost, the author. I hope the book will not be too eunuch.

1W combat power can make you explode, but 5W combat power can lead to exhaustion in swimming?

Deduct one star. Drive high and go low. He is already a strong player in the early stage of Z. With 500,000 combat power, the strength of the Ginyu Special Forces in the Z period can be lost instantly. In order to participate in the plot, he forcibly lowered his combat power, and he did not focus on his own training for a long time. The enhanced version of the spiritual time room is not used. There is also a time-traveling enemy that makes me nervous at all. None. Although the writing is quite comprehensive and includes most of the theatrical version, it is because the early combat power is too high in the writing. It gives the impression that a max-level boss is visiting the novice village. You can just go shopping in order to participate in the wisdom reduction. Even if it is too powerful, do you know how long it took Tao Baibai to climb the Kalin Tower with a combat power of more than 100? 500,000 Combat power climbs in 3 hours

Overall, it's pretty good, except that another time traveler with a system suddenly appeared and I stopped reading.

I originally thought it was a cool article, but the villains in Dragon Ball became even more outrageous when the show Dragon Ball Heroes came out, and another system villain was added. Alas, what I'm most afraid of is that the villain is not as powerful as he is powerful. What I'm most afraid of is that the villain is as smart as Zamasu. He won't be able to use the Super Dragon Balls to defeat the protagonist? ?