Dragon Ball: Despairing Timeline, I'm the Strongest in the Gohan Dimension

(Bottom middle) 6 points, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is excellent, the plug-ins are good, the imagination is good, the characters are poor, the writing is poor, the rhythm is average, the main plot is average, the subject matter is good, the logic is poor, and the economy is extremely poor (extra). This book is full of bugs. ① The time traveler has feelings for Xiaofang after merging with Nobifan. Bidili is dead, so how was Xiaofang born? ②Super No. 17, Inexplicably strengthened, is the android still alive? ③How many days does it take to save 30,000 yuan, and how much energy does it take to save more than 40,000 yuan in two years? ④That divine seed is worth 60,000? If you go to the spiritual world house and stay for ten years, exchange for divine power seeds, and instantly kill people and create humans, what else do you need to practice? Objective evaluation, if you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel: (1) Sense of immersion, plug-ins, and imagination; (2) Character design, writing style, and rhythm; (3) Main line, theme, logic; (4) Economy, sense of space, other characters...; (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Taking "medium and lower four stars and 7 points" as 0 points, the first nine items are used as the evaluation criteria. Additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level. Every -1 point in the middle or lower level will decrease the score by one level. After that, every -2 points will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel: (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent) five stars and 10 points (24). (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000) ① 9-1 points out of five stars, ② 9 points out of five stars, ③ 10 points out of five stars (18-22). (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste) ① five stars 8-1 points, ② five stars 8 points, ③ five stars 9 points (12~16). (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features) ① Five-star 7-1 points, ② Five-star 7 points, ③ Five-star 8 points, ④#8+1# (4-10). (5) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expectations, and difficult to objectively evaluate) ① Three stars? Point. (6) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems) ① Three stars 5-1 points, ② Three stars 5 points, ③ Three stars 6 points, ④ Four stars 6-1 points, ⑤ Four stars 6 points, ⑥ Four stars 7 points, ⑦#7+1 Points# (-5~2). (7) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits) ① One star 1 point, ② One star 2 points, ③ Three stars 3 points, ④ Three stars 4 points (-7~-13). (8) Inferior (a novel that reads as boring as chicken ribs, has no appeal, and cannot bring reading pleasure) 2 stars/0 points. (9) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience) ① two stars - 1 point, ② two stars - 3 points, ③ two stars - 6 points, ④ two stars - 7 points, ⑤ two stars - 8 points, ⑥ two stars - 9 points, ⑦ two stars - 10 points (-15~-27). I don't recommend this book at all, it's a poisonous weed that takes advantage of the popularity of Dragon Ball.

~It's okay for the time being~ I want to see what I'm talking about~

This book is very good, but the ending is a bit short.

Can let GT Gogeta appear in the Tournament of Power

🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 The subject matter is novel and I have never seen it before

Very well written, author.

It's good and good-looking, come on 😳[smile]🤦😎